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je mourrai si tu pars
Thread poster: Jacek Krankowski
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Feb 4, 2003

Une poésie polonaise en traduction:



Par Halina Poswiatowska



toutes les fois que je veux vivre je crie

quand la vie me quitte

je me colle à elle

je lui dis - vie

ne t\'en va pas encore



sa main chaude dans la mienne

mes lèvres à son oreille

je chuchote





vie

- comme si la vie était quelqu\'un qu\'on aime

et qui veut partir -



je me pends à son cou

je crie



je mourrai si tu pars



Traduction par Isabelle Malor-Filarsca

franceweb.fr/poesie/halina.htm

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zawsze kiedy chcê ¿yæ krzyczê

gdy ¿ycie odchodzi ode mnie

przywieram do niego

mówiê - ¿ycie

nie odchod¼ jeszcze



jego ciep³a rêka w mojej rêce

moje usta przy jego uchu

szepczê



¿ycie

- jak gdyby ¿ycie by³o kochankiem

który chce odej¶æ -



wieszam mu siê na szyi

krzyczê



umrê je¶li odejdziesz



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The effect in Polish is reinforced by the personal and possessive pronouns relating to \"life\" which are identical to masculine forms (otherwise \"life\" is neuter), unlike the French \"à elle\" (lui, sa, son are luckily sufficiently ambiguous in French to cover both genders).



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Adriana Esposito  Identity Verified
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Beautiful Feb 4, 2003

I find that this poem is really beautiful...

Thanks.


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