Eu teria traduzido da mesma maneira. Acho que a correcção não tem razão de ser, mas a frase completa ajudava.
Ninguém diria 'Tornou-se em um......'
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Eric Dos Santos Italy Local time: 00:59 Member (2010) Italian to Portuguese + ...
tornar-se um
Nov 22, 2011
Soa realmente muito mal "tornar-se em" com ou sem o artigo. Como declarado na segunda resposta do site Ciberduvidas, provavelmente se trata de uma liberdade poética, isolada, mas soa realmente mal, pelo menos aos ouvidos de um brasileiro.
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Bruno Magne Brazil Local time: 19:59 English to French + ...
Concordo com Eric
Nov 25, 2011
Eu diria: "alguém se torna um experto em algum campo"
e "o homem se transforma num animal"
Cordialmente
Bruno
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