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murderous show there hangs an air of staleness


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English term or phrase: murderous show there hangs an air of staleness
Here the sentence I wonder how to understand like this:" In the guise of news, radio and television relay the official lies. Yet over the whole sorry, murderous show there hangs an air of staleness."

I wonder what the " Yet over the whole sorry, murderous show there hangs an air of staleness."

Thank you !
macky
China
Local time: 21:25


Summary of answers provided
4 +3the deadening spectacle is repeated over and over again
Jenni Lukac
5 +1murderous show, there hangs an air of staleness
simulacra
4...Yet, over the whole pitiful, bloody show, and air of staleness pervades...
eski
3murderous show lacks vigor or spirit from inactivity or boredomYasutomo Kanazawa


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10 mins   confidence: Answerer confidence 3/5Answerer confidence 3/5
murderous show lacks vigor or spirit from inactivity or boredom


Explanation:
I think the whole sentence should read:

Yet over the whole sorrow, an air of staleness hangs in the murderous show.

The definition of the original phrase means that over the news, radio and television, lies are broadcasted (i.e. the truth is never told). But still over the whole sorrow, an air of lacking vigor or spirit from boredom lies in the murderous show.

Staleness here means impaired in efficacy, vigor, or spirit, as from inactivity or boredom.

So the whole news is not true, and lacks excitement.

Yasutomo Kanazawa
Japan
Local time: 22:25
Native speaker of: Native in JapaneseJapanese

Peer comments on this answer (and responses from the answerer)
neutral  Jim Tucker: "sorry" is correct; not a misprint. It means "pitiful."
16 mins

neutral  Tony M: I rather think your interpretation is missing the true intention of the source text
18 hrs
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1 hr   confidence: Answerer confidence 4/5Answerer confidence 4/5 peer agreement (net): +3
the deadening spectacle is repeated over and over again


Explanation:
Because the first part only speaks of "official lies" I would assume the writer is using "murderous show" in reference to the deadening of the people's senses. (my interpretation based on the fragment given). Stale is the opposite of fresh, new. To me, the writer infers that the repetition of the format or the type of content creates monotony for the viewer/ listener.

Jenni Lukac
Spain
Local time: 14:25
Specializes in field
Native speaker of: Native in EnglishEnglish

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agree  Veronika McLaren
18 mins
  -> Good afternoon and thanks, Veronica.

agree  Jim Tucker
1 hr
  -> Greetings and thanks, Jim.

agree  Marju Galitsos
19 hrs
  -> Huomenta and thanks, Marju.
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1 hr   confidence: Answerer confidence 5/5 peer agreement (net): +1
murderous show, there hangs an air of staleness


Explanation:

Here, the sentence should be broken down into two parts, and a comma should precede "there". Below is the paraphrased version of the sentence:

In the guise of news, radio and television relay the official lies. But still, an air of staleness hangs over the whole regrettable and murderous show.


simulacra
United States
Local time: 08:25
Native speaker of: Native in EnglishEnglish, Native in TurkishTurkish

Peer comments on this answer (and responses from the answerer)
agree  Liam Hamilton
3 hrs
  -> Thanks, Liam.

neutral  Tony M: A coma before 'there' would not be correct, and would lead to a false interpretation
17 hrs
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5 hrs   confidence: Answerer confidence 4/5Answerer confidence 4/5
...Yet, over the whole pitiful, bloody show, and air of staleness pervades...


Explanation:
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saludos!
eski :))

eski
Mexico
Local time: 07:25
Specializes in field
Native speaker of: Native in EnglishEnglish
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