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nothing unusual to him, or startling, or stirring...

English translation: given that or compare to, with an ambiguity of meaning, see below


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06:45 Sep 26, 2010
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English term or phrase: nothing unusual to him, or startling, or stirring...
The whole sentece like this:" She thought that nothing could seem unuausl to him, or startling, or stirring, measured against the fact, the blur, whatever it was--the breathless shock of his being here."
I just wonder the literal lnterpretation.
Thank you!
macky
Local time: 03:48
English translation:given that or compare to, with an ambiguity of meaning, see below
Explanation:
She thought that nothing could seem unusual (to the author, or perhaps also) to him, or startling, or stirring (again both tot the author and/or to him), measured against the fact (the fact which appeared almost as a ) blur, whatever it was (a fact, or a blur) --the breathless shock of his being here."

She is shocked that he is there. She has trouble dealing with his presence, so she calls his prescene a fact or a blur. With this type of fiction the use of illusion and ambiguity is very strong. the text is written so as to attribute the shock, or startling shock, or "stirring" to either him or her or both of them. It is deliberately ambiguous.

Stirring is being used in the sense of "this stirred my soul."


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Note added at 5 hrs (2010-09-26 12:36:00 GMT)
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this from a dictionary on stir may help:

STIR
transitive verb
1b : to disturb the quiet of : agitate

5a : to rouse to activity : evoke strong feelings in <music that stirs the emotions
b : to call forth (as a memory) : evoke

http://www.merriam-webster.com/dictionary/stir
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Stephanie Ezrol
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Local time: 15:48
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Summary of answers provided
5 +1nothing should have affected him emotionally
Alexandra Taggart
5هیچ چیز نمی توانست برایش غیر عادی ، عجیب و یا تکان دهنده به نظر بیاید
Komeil Zamani Babgohari
4given that or compare to, with an ambiguity of meaning, see below
Stephanie Ezrol


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28 mins   confidence: Answerer confidence 5/5
هیچ چیز نمی توانست برایش غیر عادی ، عجیب و یا تکان دهنده به نظر بیاید


Explanation:
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Komeil Zamani Babgohari
Iran
Local time: 00:18
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Native speaker of: Native in Farsi (Persian)Farsi (Persian), Native in Persian (Farsi)Persian (Farsi)

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neutral  airmailrpl: English to English translations [PRO] ???
3 hrs
  -> I don't noticed. Sorry!
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5 hrs   confidence: Answerer confidence 4/5Answerer confidence 4/5
given that or compare to, with an ambiguity of meaning, see below


Explanation:
She thought that nothing could seem unusual (to the author, or perhaps also) to him, or startling, or stirring (again both tot the author and/or to him), measured against the fact (the fact which appeared almost as a ) blur, whatever it was (a fact, or a blur) --the breathless shock of his being here."

She is shocked that he is there. She has trouble dealing with his presence, so she calls his prescene a fact or a blur. With this type of fiction the use of illusion and ambiguity is very strong. the text is written so as to attribute the shock, or startling shock, or "stirring" to either him or her or both of them. It is deliberately ambiguous.

Stirring is being used in the sense of "this stirred my soul."


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Note added at 5 hrs (2010-09-26 12:36:00 GMT)
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this from a dictionary on stir may help:

STIR
transitive verb
1b : to disturb the quiet of : agitate

5a : to rouse to activity : evoke strong feelings in <music that stirs the emotions
b : to call forth (as a memory) : evoke

http://www.merriam-webster.com/dictionary/stir

Stephanie Ezrol
United States
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22 hrs   confidence: Answerer confidence 5/5 peer agreement (net): +1
nothing should have affected him emotionally


Explanation:
"startling" - when person is startled, he is frightened, has a mild shock, or simply very agiteted, that results in a jerky involuntary movement; "stirring" - "stirring emotions" - arousing emotions.

Alexandra Taggart
Russian Federation
Local time: 23:48
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Native speaker of: Native in EnglishEnglish, Native in RussianRussian
PRO pts in category: 4

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agree  Annett Kottek: Given that the guy may or may not exist (he appears to be a figment of her grieving imagination + it's unclear if she's aware of this), it's perhaps unsurprising that nothing seems to affect him.
1 hr
  -> Thank you! I wish Sigmund Freud could help her!
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