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English term or phrase: I attended a speech...
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I would like to know which of the following is the correct expression:

1. I attended a speech by Procter & Gamble CEO.
2. I attended a speech given by Procter & Gamble CEO.

There is no special context around it. I attended that speech but do not know how to report it. A search through Google tells that expression 1 is more common than expression 2. However, grammatically speaking it seems that expression 2 is more correct. I suspect that the first is used in spoken English while the second is more formal and, therefore, used in written English. What is your choice? Thank you.

Best regards,

Luis R. Villegas H.
Mexico.
LuisVillegas
Mexico
Local time: 16:18
I attended a speech given by the CEO of Proctor and Gamble
Explanation:
Yes, you need "the" here. "Given" or equivalent is not strictly necessary but to omit it looks more like journalistic reporting (trying to cut out all words not strictly necessary) than the normal way of putting it.
I would say "the CEO of Proctor and Gamble" is better style than "the Proctor and Gamble CEO", but I am British and I am not sure my US colleagues would agree.
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Jack Doughty
United Kingdom
Local time: 22:18
Grading comment
Thank you.
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Summary of answers provided
4 +10I attended a speech given by the CEO of Proctor and Gamble
Jack Doughty
5I attended a speech given by the Proctor & Gamble CEOStephanie Ezrol
4...I attended a speech delivered by the Proctor & Gamble CEO...
eski


  

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i attended a speech...
I attended a speech given by the Proctor & Gamble CEO


Explanation:
1. You need to use "the"
2. given by is used in written text, and it provides the necessary implied verbal action

Example sentence(s):
  • A transcript of a speech given by the Prime Minister at a reception at Downing Street on 23 June 2009 for the winners of the Health for Kids Awards.
  • Two protestors held up signs as hundreds gathered outside the Columbia University campus along Broadway at 116th Street in reaction to a speech given by the president of Iran at the university today

    Reference: http://www.number10.gov.uk/Page19737
    Reference: http://www.columbiajournalist.org/article.asp?subj=city&cour...
Stephanie Ezrol
United States
Local time: 17:18
Specializes in field
Native speaker of: Native in EnglishEnglish
Notes to answerer
Asker: Thank you, Stephani.

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2 hrs   confidence: Answerer confidence 4/5Answerer confidence 4/5
i attended a speech...
...I attended a speech delivered by the Proctor & Gamble CEO...


Explanation:
22 Nov 2008 ... On November 21, 2008, President Hu Jintao attended the APEC CEO ... held in the Peruvian capital of Lima and delivered an important speech. ...
in.china-embassy.org/eng/zgbd/t523651.htm - En caché - Similares
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Saludos :))
eski

eski
Mexico
Local time: 16:18
Specializes in field
Native speaker of: Native in EnglishEnglish
PRO pts in category: 20
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Asker: Gracias, Eski.

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4 hrs   confidence: Answerer confidence 4/5Answerer confidence 4/5 peer agreement (net): +10
I attended a speech given by the CEO of Proctor and Gamble


Explanation:
Yes, you need "the" here. "Given" or equivalent is not strictly necessary but to omit it looks more like journalistic reporting (trying to cut out all words not strictly necessary) than the normal way of putting it.
I would say "the CEO of Proctor and Gamble" is better style than "the Proctor and Gamble CEO", but I am British and I am not sure my US colleagues would agree.

Jack Doughty
United Kingdom
Local time: 22:18
Native speaker of: Native in EnglishEnglish
PRO pts in category: 84
Grading comment
Thank you.
Notes to answerer
Asker: Thank you, Jack Doughty.


Peer comments on this answer (and responses from the answerer)
agree  cmwilliams
15 mins
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agree  Jenni Lukac: I can confirm that US and UK style preferences coincide in "the CEO of..."
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agree  B D Finch: Agree with "the CEO of Proctor and Gamble" as better style.
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agree  · george ·
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agree  Tony M
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agree  Sherin Khullar
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agree  Judith Hehir
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