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Tech/Engineering - Engineering (general) | | English term or phrase: as compared with the initial solutions | I am wondering if the place of the phrase *as compared with the initial solutions* is correct in the sentence below? Or maybe it is better to put it right after "new technical solutions"?
The second question is about "possible actions" - is it ok as is or maybe a better variant exists?
Any other minor corrections are also welcome :)
Thank you in advance :)
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If the analysis reveals that the new technical solutions cause, as compared with the initial solutions, significant increase in the negative effect on the environment, risks for life and health of people, infringement of the interests of third parties, the Environmental Protection Department shall forward to the Company Management (their?) recommendations on the possible actions, including, but not limited to, the following: |
| | | English translation:please see below | Explanation:
If the analysis reveals that the new technical solutions cause a sigificant increase in the negative effect on the environment as well as health risks to the general population and the infringement of the interests of third parties, relative to the first solutions, then the Environmental Protection Department shall forward their recommendations to the Company Management regarding possible actions, including, but not limited to, the following: |
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14 mins confidence:   peer agreement (net): +4 | *as compared with the initial solutions* please see below
Explanation:
If the analysis reveals that the new technical solutions cause a sigificant increase in the negative effect on the environment as well as health risks to the general population and the infringement of the interests of third parties, relative to the first solutions, then the Environmental Protection Department shall forward their recommendations to the Company Management regarding possible actions, including, but not limited to, the following:
| Carolyn Gille
Local time: 21:58
Native speaker of: English
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