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Tech/Engineering - Medical: Instruments | | English term or phrase: make sentence more clear | This is for a patent and I have to keep it as one sentence.
My first question is - is it clear that "and a first, a second and a third flat electrode" refers to "ionizing particles detector " that is "ionizing particles detector comprising a gas chamber ..., and a first, a second and a third flat electrode". Maybe a comma should be added before "provided " ?
The second question is if the word "inlet" is ok here or some other word like "entrance", "entering" would be better.
Thank you!
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The detecting means comprise at least one ionizing particles detector comprising a gas chamber provided with a window for lateral or frontal inlet of the illumination beam, and a first, a second and a third flat electrode, being placed parallel with one another.
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1 hr confidence: peer agreement (net): +2 The detection means consists of at least one ionizing particles detector comprising a first, a secon
Explanation:
The detection means [or means of detection] consists of at least one ionizing particles detector comprising a first, a second and a third flat electrode [or 3 flat electrodes], placed parallel to each other and a gas chamber with a window that allows lateral or frontal admission of the illumination beam.
| Suzan Hamer
Netherlands
Local time: 03:21
Native speaker of:  English
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