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13:27 Feb 25, 2008
English to English translations [Non-PRO]
Transport / Transportation / Shipping
English term or phrase: corrected
In the following context:

"Population-based information regarding traffic and industrial accidents also suggests a link between sleepiness and life-threatening events. The highest rate of automobile accidents occurs in the early morning hours, which is notable because the fewest automobiles are on the road during these hours. Also during these early morning hours, the greatest degree of sleepiness is experienced. Long-haul truck drivers have accidents most frequently (even corrected for hours driving before the accident) during the early morning hours, again when sleepiness reaches its zenith."

The part between brackets doesn't seem to make sense. I'm even considering it being a typo. Any thoughts are welcome.
Cristina Popescu
Romania
Local time: 04:27
English translation:adjusted
Explanation:
I would read it that an adjustment has been made to the statistics to take into account the hours driven before the accident. HTH. I wonder if this is not written by a native speaker...
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xxxSimonFJohnso
United Kingdom
Local time: 04:27
Grading comment
Thanks for your effort. Everyone's answers have been very helpful, but since, as far as I know, Kudoz points cannot be shared, I'll give them all to the fastest reply. Thank you, Simon.
4 KudoZ points were awarded for this answer



Summary of answers provided
3 +8adjustedxxxSimonFJohnso
4 +6allowing for
Jack Doughty
4 +2adjusted
Marie-Hélène Hayles
4 +1taken into accountArcoiris


  

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3 mins   confidence: Answerer confidence 3/5Answerer confidence 3/5 peer agreement (net): +8
adjusted


Explanation:
I would read it that an adjustment has been made to the statistics to take into account the hours driven before the accident. HTH. I wonder if this is not written by a native speaker...

xxxSimonFJohnso
United Kingdom
Local time: 04:27
Native speaker of: English
Grading comment
Thanks for your effort. Everyone's answers have been very helpful, but since, as far as I know, Kudoz points cannot be shared, I'll give them all to the fastest reply. Thank you, Simon.
Notes to answerer
Asker: Thank you all. And it's written by a native speaker, as far as I know.


Peer comments on this answer (and responses from the answerer)
agree  Marie-Hélène Hayles
4 mins
  -> Thanks

agree  Patricia Fierro, M. Sc.
10 mins
  -> Thanks

agree  Vicky Nash
12 mins
  -> Thanks

agree  Taña Dalglish: I tend to agree with you on both counts. It does appear to be written by a non-native speaker (fewest? ... I would say fewer). Anyway, ....
19 mins
  -> Thanks

agree  Alaa Abdulsalam: with You and Tana
1 hr
  -> Thanks

agree  Alfa Trans
5 hrs
  -> Thanks

agree  Phong Le
14 hrs
  -> Thanks

agree  Rusinterp
12 days
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4 mins   confidence: Answerer confidence 4/5Answerer confidence 4/5 peer agreement (net): +6
allowing for


Explanation:

Long-haul truck drivers have accidents most frequently during the early morning hours, even after taking into account the number of hours they have been driving immediately before the night-time period.

Jack Doughty
Local time: 02:27
Native speaker of: Native in EnglishEnglish
PRO pts in category: 27
Notes to answerer
Asker: Thank you, Jack.


Peer comments on this answer (and responses from the answerer)
agree  Marie-Hélène Hayles: snap!
3 mins
  -> Thank you.

agree  Vicky Nash
12 mins
  -> Thank you.

agree  Amanda Ménage: A clear way of putting it.
26 mins
  -> Thank you.

agree  Christine Andersen
40 mins
  -> Thank you

agree  Alaa Abdulsalam
1 hr
  -> Thank you.

agree  Rusinterp
12 days
  -> Thank you.
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5 mins   confidence: Answerer confidence 4/5Answerer confidence 4/5 peer agreement (net): +1
taken into account


Explanation:
it means that the figures for number of accidents could be attributed to the number of hours the driver has been behind the wheel, rather than to sleepiness. in this case it's saying that even after considering / adjusting / taking into account these other factors, the number of accidents during the early hours is still high

Arcoiris
Local time: 02:27
Native speaker of: Native in EnglishEnglish, Native in SpanishSpanish
Notes to answerer
Asker: Thank you, Arcoiris.


Peer comments on this answer (and responses from the answerer)
agree  Vicky Nash
11 mins
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7 mins   confidence: Answerer confidence 4/5Answerer confidence 4/5 peer agreement (net): +2
adjusted


Explanation:
It makes perfect sense. Various factors contribute to cause accidents. Here, the text says that even after having accounted for differences in the number of hours that the driver had driven before the accident, the early morning is the time when most accidents occur.

In other words, whether the driver has driven one hour or several hours before the accident is not as important a factor as the time of day.

Marie-Hélène Hayles
Local time: 03:27
Native speaker of: Native in EnglishEnglish
Notes to answerer
Asker: Thank you, Marie Helene.


Peer comments on this answer (and responses from the answerer)
agree  Vicky Nash
9 mins

agree  Alaa Abdulsalam: impressive
57 mins
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Changes made by editors
Feb 25, 2008 - Changes made by Marie-Hélène Hayles:
LevelPRO => Non-PRO


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