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ontbreekt het uw databasebeheerder soms aan kennis?


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17:39 Oct 4, 2007
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Dutch to English translations [PRO]
Marketing - Computers: Software / marketing flyer
Dutch term or phrase: ontbreekt het uw databasebeheerder soms aan kennis?
I am having trouble with this term as I find writing something like the DB manager is lacking knowledge is rather derogatory towards the person concerned. If anyone can think of a politer way of putting it, I'd be most grateful!
Justine Fischbach
Local time: 11:31


Summary of answers provided
3 +4Can your DB administrator walk on water?Ken Cox
4 +1Is your database manager not up to scratch?xxxjarry
4Database management, to be effective, has to be up to date!
L.J.Wessel van Leeuwen
3 +1Database management requires excellent knowledge and skills
Siobhan Schoonhoff-Reilly
3Can your database administrator keep up?
vixen
4 -1Are your DB administrator's skills sometimes stretched beyond the limit?telraam
3Do you feel your DB admin does not always meet your needs?Margreet Logmans
3 -1Need to replace your database adminstrator?
Buck
2Maybe your database administrator could use some additional knowledge?
Henk Peelen


Discussion entries: 4





  

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38 mins   confidence: Answerer confidence 4/5Answerer confidence 4/5 peer agreement (net): -1
Are your DB administrator's skills sometimes stretched beyond the limit?


Explanation:
It is still not very polite to the DB administrator - but it may help.

telraam
Local time: 12:31
Native speaker of: Native in EnglishEnglish
Notes to answerer
Asker:

Asker: thx Jonathan, I'm still working on it. Do you (and anyone else reading this) think the Dutch also comes across as rude?


Peer comments on this answer (and responses from the answerer)
neutral  xxxjarry: Not very idiomatic
47 mins
  -> Totally disagree. I think it an excellent advertising heading.

disagree  EdithK: with jarry
1 hr

neutral  Lawyer-Linguist: with Jarry
1 day20 hrs
  -> I'm trying to work out what is not idiomatic about it. You stretch things to the limit - so why not beyond the limit?
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58 mins   confidence: Answerer confidence 3/5Answerer confidence 3/5
Do you feel your DB admin does not always meet your needs?


Explanation:
Or something like this - live up to expectations, fulfill. I'm just trying to give you an idea here. This really is a 'native speaker' thing, I trust you'll come up with something good.

Margreet Logmans
Netherlands
Local time: 12:31
Works in field
Native speaker of: Dutch

Peer comments on this answer (and responses from the answerer)
neutral  xxxjarry: Sounds too personal in the context
31 mins
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1 hr   confidence: Answerer confidence 3/5Answerer confidence 3/5 peer agreement (net): +1
Database management requires excellent knowledge and skills


Explanation:
Why not leave it up to the reader (potential customer) to ask themselves whether or not their DB manager/administrator satisfy their database requirements. Surely the object of the text is to promote the service offered by the company and not to undermine the ability of (any) DB manager(s).

Siobhan Schoonhoff-Reilly
Local time: 12:31
Native speaker of: Native in EnglishEnglish

Peer comments on this answer (and responses from the answerer)
neutral  xxxjarry: I don't think this is what is intended. As Jonathan rightly points out, it is administration and not management. In the IT (database) context, administration and management are two very different things. Just Google :-)
14 mins
  -> Thank you for your comment Jarry, in my opinion in this context (marketing) a translator should look beyond the literal meaning of the words. As for administration v. management, hardly a valid point since these words are synonymous.

agree  Tina Vonhof: Not literally what it says, but I think this is nice and avoids any derogatory connotations.
44 mins
  -> Thank you, Tina.

neutral  telraam: I think it rather flat. Doesn't make me want to read further.
1 day21 hrs
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1 hr   confidence: Answerer confidence 4/5Answerer confidence 4/5 peer agreement (net): +1
Is your database manager not up to scratch?


Explanation:
Meaning:
If something doesn't come up to scratch, it doesn't meet the standard required or expected.


xxxjarry
South Africa
Local time: 12:31
Works in field
Native speaker of: English
PRO pts in category: 24

Peer comments on this answer (and responses from the answerer)
disagree  telraam: beheerder is not manager but administrator.
30 mins
  -> In this context you are quite right. It should be data administrator. The rest of my suggested answer still stands, however.

agree  Siobhan Schoonhoff-Reilly: A little bit informal perhaps, but this could work. And, 'database manager' is a job title (77,400,000 hits on google).
13 hrs
  -> Thank you

agree  Lawyer-Linguist: or "Does your DB Administrator never put a foot wrong?" or "Could your DB Administrator sometimes do with a helping hand?"
1 day19 hrs
  -> Thanks Debbie
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55 mins   confidence: Answerer confidence 3/5Answerer confidence 3/5 peer agreement (net): -1
Need to replace your database adminstrator?


Explanation:
The possibilities are endless. It's negative advertising suggesting that "your" database needs "their" professional touch. Boring, and not at all negative in Dutch.

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Note added at 2 hrs (2007-10-04 19:54:51 GMT)
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This is obviously an advertising slogan.

Buck
Netherlands
Local time: 12:31
Specializes in field
Native speaker of: Native in EnglishEnglish
PRO pts in category: 4

Peer comments on this answer (and responses from the answerer)
neutral  xxxjarry: Is not really the catch phrase that is wanted here
33 mins

disagree  EdithK: that's really derogatory
1 hr
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4 hrs   confidence: Answerer confidence 2/5Answerer confidence 2/5
Maybe your database administrator could use some additional knowledge?


Explanation:
Could be conceived both very friendly and tersely, so goal-oriented, in my opinion.

Henk Peelen
Netherlands
Local time: 12:31
Works in field
Native speaker of: Native in DutchDutch
PRO pts in category: 4
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15 hrs   confidence: Answerer confidence 3/5Answerer confidence 3/5
Can your database administrator keep up?


Explanation:
This may be a little ambiguous, since it could refer to the issue of time as well as skills, but I still think it might work in the given context.

Perhaps you could also insert the word 'always' to address the use of 'soms' in the source.

vixen
Local time: 13:31
Works in field
Native speaker of: Native in DutchDutch
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2 hrs   confidence: Answerer confidence 3/5Answerer confidence 3/5 peer agreement (net): +4
Can your DB administrator walk on water?


Explanation:
Personally, I don't see the Dutch text as rude, but instead as a good opening line to get attention, but this sort of thing is very culture-specific and a direct translation wouldn't go down well everywhere.

As you mention that the DB admin isn't mentioned anywhere else in the text, you could turn it around as per my suggestion, perhaps with a little intro to the effect of 'if he can't, we can help'.

This is PR, and rule number 1 in PR is that it has to work.

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Note added at 15 hrs (2007-10-05 09:19:52 GMT)
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Further comment: IMO the intention of the Dutch slogan is to provoke the response 'Hmmm, maybe we *could* use a bit of help'. If you simply said 'We can help you with your DB administration', the response would more likely be 'So what?' or 'We don't need any help'', and the flyer would land directly in the waste-paper basket.

Ken Cox
Local time: 12:31
Native speaker of: Native in EnglishEnglish
PRO pts in category: 12

Peer comments on this answer (and responses from the answerer)
agree  EdithK: I like it.
9 hrs

agree  Lawyer-Linguist: or "Does your DB Administrator never put a foot wrong?"
1 day18 hrs

agree  xxxjarry
1 day18 hrs

agree  telraam: Great line
1 day19 hrs
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10 hrs   confidence: Answerer confidence 4/5Answerer confidence 4/5
Database management, to be effective, has to be up to date!


Explanation:
Date base is the crucial point.

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Note added at 2 days17 hrs (2007-10-07 10:51:03 GMT)
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Mu suggestion is based on the point that an effective "database manager" is always up to date.
The asker wanted to move away from the "person" and the I believe that the next crucial point is the base.

L.J.Wessel van Leeuwen
South Africa
Local time: 12:31
Native speaker of: Native in EnglishEnglish, Native in DutchDutch

Peer comments on this answer (and responses from the answerer)
agree  Tina Vonhof: Another option I like .
8 hrs

disagree  telraam: Doesn't have the challenging nature of the original
1 day11 hrs
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