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06:47 Feb 18, 2006
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English to English translations [Non-PRO]
Marketing - Advertising / Public Relations
English term or phrase: has signed this strategic business alliance with another company has entered into
We are very proud and delighted to announce that our company has signed this strategic business alliance with another company has entered into a strategic alliance with X company.

There appears to be some error in this sentence. Could you suggest something in this connection?
xxxSanjiv Sadan
Local time: 02:52
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Summary of answers provided
3 +10choose one or the otherRHELLER
5 +2If it is two alliances --add "AND"
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3 mins   confidence: Answerer confidence 3/5Answerer confidence 3/5 peer agreement (net): +10
sentence
choose one or the other


Explanation:
has signed this strategic business alliance with another company
OR
has entered into a strategic alliance with X company.


RHELLER
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Native speaker of: Native in EnglishEnglish
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agree  Marie Scarano
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agree  Kurt Porter
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agree  Refugio: preferably the latter
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4 hrs   confidence: Answerer confidence 5/5 peer agreement (net): +2
sentence
If it is two alliances --add "AND"


Explanation:
We are very proud and delighted to announce that our company has signed this strategic business alliance with another company AND has entered into a strategic alliance with X company.


airmailrpl
Brazil
Local time: 18:22
Native speaker of: Native in EnglishEnglish, Native in PortuguesePortuguese
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agree  Rachel Fell: good point
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agree  Morad Safe
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Mar 13, 2006 - Changes made by NancyLynn:
Term askedsentence » has signed this strategic business alliance with another company has entered into


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