17:13 Sep 17, 2007 |
English language (monolingual) [PRO] Tech/Engineering - Internet, e-Commerce | |||||
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| Selected response from: jccantrell United States Local time: 16:49 | ||||
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3 +7 | Not exemplary ... |
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4 +1 | procedure illustrated by the following example |
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4 | best word for the job |
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Not exemplary ... Explanation: Speaking from the USA, I might rephrase the entire sentence, something like this: To buy a product on [] site, follow this procedure as an example. {This is only an example, the actual procedure may vary.} The part in {} is by way of explanation. I do not think you need it. |
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