English translation: when refurbishing/during refurbishment
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English to English translations [PRO] Social Sciences - Linguistics / grammar question
English term or phrase:upon
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I'm doing the revision but would like to check some language issues with you ...
My concern here is the preposition 'upon'... I use it mostly in legal translations, but what about here?
"Measures to decentralize water management in single and contiguous buildings upon refurbishment will be soon feasible."
"Different housing estates in ... and ... were examined in terms of the applicability of decentralized water systems upon refurbishing the existing premises"
"The necessary measures can be adopted with relatively low effort upon refurbishing buildings."