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English translation: There isn't any correlation between attitude(s) /result(s) from social interaction

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09:03 Mar 9, 2002
English to English translations [Non-PRO]
English term or phrase: plz edit the sentence
[Sentence]
Correlation between age and attitude and result from social interaction with friend does not exist.
[info]
1) correlation does not exist between two thing, not three,that is, (age) and (attitude and result...)
[more info]
if age = (1)
attitude = (2)
result. .... = (3)
correlation does not exist between (1) and (2)+(3)
Nothing to do with the correlation between (2) and (3)
Thai Translation
Local time: 08:18
English translation:There isn't any correlation between attitude(s) /result(s) from social interaction
Explanation:
There isn't any correlation between attitude(s) /result(s) from social interaction with friend(s) and age.

I think that's what you want... :-))

Alternatives:

Age does not have a correlation to attitude and result(s) from social interactions with friend(s).

A correlation between age on one hand and attitude and result(s) from social interaction with friend(s) on the other does not exist.

*I like the last one best...if you really want to make sure it is understood like that...

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Note added at 2002-03-09 09:28:37 (GMT)
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your original sentence is grammatically slightly adrift...\"social interaction with friends\" or \"social interaction with a friend\" would be correct
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Klaus Dorn
Local time: 04:18
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23 mins   confidence: Answerer confidence 4/5Answerer confidence 4/5 peer agreement (net): +2
There isn't any correlation between attitude(s) /result(s) from social interaction


Explanation:
There isn't any correlation between attitude(s) /result(s) from social interaction with friend(s) and age.

I think that's what you want... :-))

Alternatives:

Age does not have a correlation to attitude and result(s) from social interactions with friend(s).

A correlation between age on one hand and attitude and result(s) from social interaction with friend(s) on the other does not exist.

*I like the last one best...if you really want to make sure it is understood like that...

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Note added at 2002-03-09 09:28:37 (GMT)
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your original sentence is grammatically slightly adrift...\"social interaction with friends\" or \"social interaction with a friend\" would be correct

Klaus Dorn
Local time: 04:18
Native speaker of: Native in EnglishEnglish, Native in GermanGerman
PRO pts in pair: 35

Peer comments on this answer (and responses from the answerer)
agree  Gilbert Ashley: Age has no correlation to attitude and results from social interaction with friends.
43 mins

agree  Berni Armstrong: but I prefer "there is no correlation" - in a formal report it is not usual to include contractions "isn't" etc.
2 hrs
  -> "there is no" is grammatically incorrect
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