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A marriage based upon a relationship emphasizing quality Explanation: A unison by relationship in qualities |
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acting in unison, bound together by shared ideals Explanation: or put differently (but meaning the same) acting in unison, bound together by common ideals -------------------------------------------------- Note added at 2003-05-27 09:48:01 (GMT) -------------------------------------------------- It is dreadful English. The unison is likely to come from \"acting in unison\" meaning \'acting together\', \'acting as one\' or \'working in close cooperation\' -------------------------------------------------- Note added at 2003-05-27 09:48:48 (GMT) -------------------------------------------------- It is dreadful English. The unison is likely to come from \"acting in unison\" meaning \'acting together\', \'acting as one\' or \'working in close cooperation\' -------------------------------------------------- Note added at 2003-05-27 09:51:15 (GMT) -------------------------------------------------- OR: \"United by our shared qualities\" OR: \"United by our mutual quality\" (emphasisizes idea of a shared high quality !) Good luck Giuli -------------------------------------------------- Note added at 2003-05-27 09:56:56 (GMT) -------------------------------------------------- Actually I don\'t like my last suggestion \"United by our mutual quality\" for a political text - it has to much of a \'business\' feel. All the other suggestions I\'ve made work well for political / diplomatic rhetoric. Given it\'s political rhetoric, you might like to consider: \"United by our common outlook\" \"A unity based on our shared outlook\" -------------------------------------------------- Note added at 2003-05-27 11:05:55 (GMT) -------------------------------------------------- typo: should read, \' too much of a business feel......\' |
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