09:14 Jan 25, 2004 |
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| Selected response from: chica nueva Local time: 19:59 | ||||
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4 +9 | the brilliant idea wasn't going according to plan |
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4 +1 | it was ineffective |
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4 | It was not happening |
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3 +1 | the mother's idea, that I should actually move on, wasn't working (= having any effect). |
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2 | the result wasn't the one I guessed |
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It was not happening Explanation: Something was preventing this from happening. She could not do it for some reason |
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the result wasn't the one I guessed Explanation: The things were not going in the right way... |
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it wasn't working the brilliant idea wasn't going according to plan Explanation: I take the 'it' to mean that the 'brilliant idea of the Mother-turned-dangerously-empowered-advice-columist' wasn't going according to plan - meaning that the mother had maybe tried to act the dangerously empowered advice columnist and had failed, or was failing. -------------------------------------------------- Note added at 1 hr 56 mins (2004-01-25 11:10:55 GMT) -------------------------------------------------- OR - A bit ambiguous. Could mean that \'I\' was trying to move on and it just wasn\'t working, \'I\' wasn\'t getting anywhere. Was the mother trying to help her move on, but it isn\'t working? Just some ideas. -------------------------------------------------- Note added at 1 hr 57 mins (2004-01-25 11:12:02 GMT) -------------------------------------------------- No, sticking with my first answer. |
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