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09:07 Aug 14, 2006 |
English language (monolingual) [PRO] Art/Literary - Poetry & Literature | |||||||
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| Selected response from: Caryl Swift Poland Local time: 19:15 | ||||||
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disappeared and returned, coming and going, which went on for quite a long time Explanation: Taking a few spears or bows into the bargain, they would disappear and return, coming and going, which went on for quite a long time. A suggestion Could I also suggest that it might be better to say: 'They split up into twos . . .' -------------------------------------------------- Note added at 12 mins (2006-08-14 09:19:43 GMT) -------------------------------------------------- Sorry, I missed the fact that you've used 'would', so: ' . . . they would disappear and return, coming and going, which went on for quite a long time' Depending on the situation and on who the observer/narrator is, you could also say: ' . . . went on for quite some time.' (Slightly more 'adult'). |
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