When there was no more sand trickling down
English translation: when the sand had stopped trickling down..
| 07:38 Oct 22, 2007 |
| English language (monolingual) [PRO] Art/Literary - Poetry & Literature | |||||||
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|  Selected response from: Carol Gullidge United Kingdom Local time: 06:20 | ||||||
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| 4 +13 | when the sand had stopped trickling down.. |
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| 3 | when she had rinsed/ whipped all the sand from her body after having been covered with it |
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peer agreement (net): +13
peer agreement (net): +13| when there was no more sand trickling down when the sand had stopped trickling down.. Explanation: There's actually nothing at all wrong with it as it is, especially for a children's story, but this is probably how I'd say it. "to her feet" is redundant, but again, this is a story for children... |
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