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07:10 Apr 5, 2008 |
English language (monolingual) [PRO] Art/Literary - Poetry & Literature / traveling | |||||||
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| Selected response from: Mark Berelekhis United States Local time: 06:40 | ||||||
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4 +7 | baggage, which consisted of mainly tourist equipment, and... |
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4 +1 | tourist load |
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4 +1 | baggage... |
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baggage, which consisted of mainly tourist equipment, and... Explanation: Your version is not incorrect, I just feel something along these lines would be more clear and read a bit more natural. -------------------------------------------------- Note added at 8 mins (2008-04-05 07:18:12 GMT) -------------------------------------------------- It also breaks the sentence up, which helps with the flow. |
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