18:24 Aug 29, 2008 |
English language (monolingual) [PRO] Art/Literary - Poetry & Literature / Yunus Emre / Sufism | |||||||
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| Selected response from: Mark Berelekhis United States Local time: 23:31 | ||||||
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4 +2 | 100% correct from grammatical standpoint |
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3 | I think that line is OK |
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there's an i within me, deep, deeper than i I think that line is OK Explanation: There are other poems using similar expressions, such as this one: Gazza_IV There is an ‘I’ within me standing proud. of all it sees, to give commands,. living there alone, homunculus enthroned,. beholden to no rule or law ... www.imprint.co.uk/Frame_348.htm |
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there's an i within me, deep, deeper than i 100% correct from grammatical standpoint Explanation: As far as everything else... well, it's poetry :) -------------------------------------------------- Note added at 19 mins (2008-08-29 18:44:02 GMT) Post-grading -------------------------------------------------- Lol, thank you :) |
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