14:46 Dec 5, 2004 |
English language (monolingual) [PRO] Art/Literary - Poetry & Literature / structural | |||||||
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| Selected response from: Armorel Young Local time: 08:54 | ||||||
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4 +15 | one suggestion |
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5 +2 | It looks fine to me |
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5 +2 | Since they had... |
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3 +3 | The beginning and the end... |
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3 +3 | make it bit more slangy |
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4 +1 | [advice on the structure] |
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advise on the structure please [advice on the structure] Explanation: It's acceptable as it is, but I agree that infinitives would be better — i.e. "get a drink, have a talk, pick on somebody ..." But it's a matter of style; grammatically, it works either way. |
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7 mins confidence: peer agreement (net): +2
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