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3 +7 | between the maximum and (the) minimum stress |
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3 | between the maximum stress and minimum stress |
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between the maximum stress and minimum stress Explanation: I would have a strong preference for repeating the word "stress" for optimum clarity. If you have a space or word-count constraint and you absolutely don't want to repeat "stress", then perhaps "the maximum and minimum stress values" or the "Total Rephrase" treatment would be indicated. But back to your original question as asked... I agree with Caryl that you would not use a plural of "stress". |
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between the maximum and (the) minimum stress Explanation: In this context, 'stress' is an uncountable noun, so has no plural form. IMO, the use of the second 'the' is optional here, although using it stresses (no pun intended!) that there are two extremes - the one and the other. 1) between the maximum and the minimum stress 2) between the maximum and minimum stresses 3) between the maximum and the minimum stresses My concern here is the usage of the second "the" and the plural of "stress" -------------------------------------------------- Note added at 8 mins (2006-08-15 10:52:58 GMT) -------------------------------------------------- Srry, I should have added that there are contexts in which 'stress' is a countable noun, for example 'the stresses and strains of life in the big city', where (theoretically at least), we can count those stresses. -------------------------------------------------- Note added at 9 mins (2006-08-15 10:53:50 GMT) -------------------------------------------------- That should be 'sOrry' above - sorry about the typo. -------------------------------------------------- Note added at 11 mins (2006-08-15 10:55:47 GMT) -------------------------------------------------- And I forgot to delete your text from my answer after I'd written the answer - please ignore it - I simply pasted it in to refer to while I was writing the answer - sorry again (I'm using a borrowed computer and I'm completely lost) :-( -------------------------------------------------- Note added at 2 hrs (2006-08-15 12:46:21 GMT) -------------------------------------------------- In answer to your question, I would say no - the thing is that I think 'stress' here is uncountable, so even if you used it twice, you would need to say: 'between the maximum stress and the minimum stress' Hope that helps! :-) -------------------------------------------------- Note added at 2 hrs (2006-08-15 12:57:48 GMT) -------------------------------------------------- Ok, thanks! But still, isn't the maximum stress component the maximum and the minimum stress component the mininum? So, could it look like this: 'between the maximum stress component and the minium stress component' ? -------------------------------------------------- Note added at 2 hrs (2006-08-15 13:11:15 GMT) -------------------------------------------------- Well, that depends, I guess, on whether it's possible for there to be more than one maximum and one minimum stress in the cycle. -------------------------------------------------- Note added at 2 hrs (2006-08-15 13:18:22 GMT) -------------------------------------------------- So, if there is only one minimum and one maximum, then my answer wouldn't change. Neither would my note about the second 'the'. :-) -------------------------------------------------- Note added at 2 hrs (2006-08-15 13:25:49 GMT) -------------------------------------------------- My pleasure - just hope it's been of help! :-) -------------------------------------------------- Note added at 3 hrs (2006-08-15 13:58:39 GMT) -------------------------------------------------- Actually, thinking about it in the light of your notes, I would say that here you definitely want 'the maximum and the minimum stress). :-) -------------------------------------------------- Note added at 2 days21 hrs (2006-08-18 08:31:29 GMT) Post-grading -------------------------------------------------- Yes, as Kari says, they do. :-) |
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