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Chinese translation: 一次购物,一份支持


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English term or phrase:show your support with every purchase you make
Chinese translation:一次购物,一份支持
Entered by: Wilman
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00:50 Jun 13, 2010
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Advertising / Public Relations
English term or phrase: show your support with every purchase you make
This is in an advertisement. I have
"将你每一次购物化成对我们的一份支持" but it does not seem very eyecatching. Any suggestion please? Thanks.
Wilman
United States
Local time: 17:23
一次购物,一份支持
Explanation:
每次购物都是一份支持。

如果是标语口号,最好不要用人称代词,听起来不够铿锵有力。
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Bin Tiede
Germany
Local time: 23:23
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Thanks.
4 KudoZ points were awarded for this answer



Summary of answers provided
4您每一次的惠顾都是对我们莫大的支持
Huijiao Deng
3 +1一次购物,一份支持
Bin Tiede
4您每次的购物都是对我们的支持
Yulin Chang
4您的每次购物都是对(...)的莫大支持
BAIYU
4购物表支持/购买表支持
Evelyn G
3惠顧表支持
pkchan


  

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6 mins   confidence: Answerer confidence 4/5Answerer confidence 4/5
您每次的购物都是对我们的支持


Explanation:
請參考~^^

Yulin Chang
Taiwan
Local time: 05:23
Native speaker of: Native in ChineseChinese
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36 mins   confidence: Answerer confidence 4/5Answerer confidence 4/5
您的每次购物都是对(...)的莫大支持


Explanation:
这个估计是一种购物捐助活动,比如每次购物(刷卡),会将一定的金额或购物金额的一定比例捐助给某个机构或某一项活动。

您的每次购物都是对(...)的莫大支持。... 部分加上捐助对象或捐助活动的名称。

BAIYU
China
Local time: 05:23
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3 hrs   confidence: Answerer confidence 3/5Answerer confidence 3/5
惠顧表支持


Explanation:
不喜歡直譯

pkchan
United States
Local time: 17:23
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9 hrs   confidence: Answerer confidence 3/5Answerer confidence 3/5 peer agreement (net): +1
一次购物,一份支持


Explanation:
每次购物都是一份支持。

如果是标语口号,最好不要用人称代词,听起来不够铿锵有力。

Bin Tiede
Germany
Local time: 23:23
Native speaker of: Native in ChineseChinese
PRO pts in category: 12
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Thanks.

Peer comments on this answer (and responses from the answerer)
agree  Jean@LA: 口語短句的確比較會是比較catchy的廣告,再更像廣告一點:「一次購物,萬分支持」 :-)
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21 hrs   confidence: Answerer confidence 4/5Answerer confidence 4/5
您每一次的惠顾都是对我们莫大的支持


Explanation:
将广告词译成“您每一次的惠顾都是对我们莫大的支持”,比较直译来得舒服

Huijiao Deng
Italy
Local time: 23:23
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1 day16 hrs   confidence: Answerer confidence 4/5Answerer confidence 4/5
购物表支持/购买表支持


Explanation:
如果推销的是有形商品,可用“购物表支持”;如果是无形商品如服务等,“购买表支持”更合适。

该翻译受pkchan的启发。只是觉得用他建议的“惠顾”的话,缺失一个“购买”的意思。Thanks to pkchan!

Evelyn G
Local time: 17:23
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