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First a pioneer, then a perfectionist.

Chinese translation: 匠心独运,完美呈现


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01:38 Nov 15, 2011
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Art/Literary - Advertising / Public Relations / 意大利浓缩咖啡的广告语
English term or phrase: First a pioneer, then a perfectionist.
原文:
http://www.philips.com.au/c/espresso/182451/cat/
Ivan Niu
China
Local time: 05:24
Chinese translation:匠心独运,完美呈现
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仅供参考。
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Alina Liu
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Summary of answers provided
3 +2开路先锋,独具匠心
Phil Hand
3 +2匠心独运,完美呈现
Alina Liu
4勇于追求品质(的你),独享完美咖啡。
Tien Huang
4创意与做工的完美结合
Wei Poulin
4开路先锋 ,尽善尽美
Mei Reynaud
4即创新又完美
EngChi
3首/既开风气之先,终/亦至完美之境
J.H. Wang
3既是创新者,亦是完美主义者。
alvinliu


  

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既是创新者,亦是完美主义者。


Explanation:
FYI

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即创新又完美


Explanation:
我觉得这样翻较合适. I think it is better to translate this way.

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开路先锋,独具匠心


Explanation:
考虑用成语吧,在这种文章中,小标题应该是有号召力的,动人的小语。英文的两个关键词pioneer和perfectionist都是P开头,而且有一定的超出人期待的意思冲突。我就选先锋和匠这两个概念来反映。
但这种需要中文为母语的人来发挥,我对成语没有足够的深度了解。

Phil Hand
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agree  jarv95888: Agree. (or 开路先锋,尽善尽美)
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agree  Vladys
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匠心独运,完美呈现


Explanation:
仅供参考。

Alina Liu
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Peer comments on this answer (and responses from the answerer)
agree  Jun Ng: 我💓你这个版本,感觉很美,我如果是客户一定会选这个。
12 hrs

agree  J.H. Wang: 其实很不错,只是前半句没有翻译出来
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开路先锋 ,尽善尽美


Explanation:
作为广告语,言简意赅重点突出的同时,琅琅上口也很重要。所以试着翻译成这样的短语形式,供你参考,呵呵。
"XX咖啡, 开路先锋,尽善尽美."

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first a pioneer, then a perfectionist.
创意与做工的完美结合


Explanation:
just my understanding

Wei Poulin
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first a pioneer, then a perfectionist.
勇于追求品质(的你),独享完美咖啡。


Explanation:
这句广告语的意思应该是说,首先你是一个勇于尝鲜的人,才会买咖啡机,但是咖啡机的优质让你成了咖啡的完美主义者

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first a pioneer, then a perfectionist.
首/既开风气之先,终/亦至完美之境


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FYI

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