Explanation: "回饋稿" is essentially a draft text for circulation among stakeholders to seek feedbacks. After concerns raised by feed-backs are addressed, 回饋稿 is then publicized or promulgated officially as a formal document, e.g. laws, regulations, etc. This is common practice with the government in a number of countries, e.g. in China, where official documents are often circulated among relevant government bodies before becoming final. So, its translation can be properly dealt with as a "draft circulated for the purpose of seeking comments", a "draft for soliciting feedbacks", etc.
I think your suggestions are closer to the Chinese term. Thank you for the suggestions and the detailed explanation. 4 KudoZ points were awarded for this answer
sunfootprint China Local time: 06:02 Native speaker of: Chinese
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Asker: Hi! I don't know what exactly is 回饋稿. It appears in a CV of a journalist major, who wrote 回饋稿 in her internship at a news agency. So I suppose it's something like a news article but not a formal one. I suppose there's a jargon for it in journalism.
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Reference information: Rewriting: To allow you to write this major writing assignment without the pressures of grading, there is a "draft version" submission date during the eight week of class. You will turn in a first draft of your major assignment on this date, and I will comment on -- but not grade -- it. You will then rewrite the paper and submit it for grading. The final deadline is the next-to-last class of the term. http://www.davidabrahamson.com/WWW/Syllabi/literary_journali...
I believe the term "comments" is more commonly used in journalism and is more formal in tone.
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