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09:27 Mar 19, 2002 |
English to Chinese translations [Non-PRO] Marketing | |||||||
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4 +1 | 以便在更加了解业务现状的情况下,作出更有针对性的商业决定。 |
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4 +1 | 掌握信息,做出有针对性的商业决策。 |
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4 +1 | 明智的、必然的 |
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4 | informed and targeted =信息掌握充分和目标明确的 |
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informed and targeted =信息掌握充分和目标明确的 Explanation: make more informed and targeted business decisions = 制定出信息掌握更加充分和目标更加明确的决定 -------------------------------------------------- Note added at 2002-03-19 10:03:44 (GMT) -------------------------------------------------- Sorry, missed a word in the previous translation: make more informed and targeted business decisions = 制定出信息掌握更加充分和目标更加明确的商务决定 |
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以便在更加了解业务现状的情况下,作出更有针对性的商业决定。 Explanation: 并在更加了解业务现状的情况下,作出更有针对性的商业决定。 这里需要采用词类转换的翻译方法,将informed从形容词转换为副词,使句子符合中文说话的习惯。 |
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掌握信息,做出有针对性的商业决策。 Explanation: 同意 Bin Li 的思路。试著译得简洁一些: ...从售货机中采集数据,以便掌握信息,做出有针对性的商业决策。 |
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明智的、必然的 Explanation: informed 明智的、知其所以然的 targeted 目标明确的 (Rendition need improvement) **仅供参考、后果自负** |
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