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Art/Literary - Poetry & Literature / Short Piece | | English term or phrase: Eng-Chn Translation, Please Look Below | This is a short piece of poetry/fiction that I have been asked to translate from ENG->CHN for a class at school. I am not using this for pay or work, it is just a part of my homework for class. It is fairly difficult for me, and so I humbly ask for your help so that I can learn from your translation. Thank you
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With September comes a sense of autumn. It creeps in on a misty dawn and vanishes in the hot afternoon. It tiptoes through the treetops, rouging a few leaves, then rides a tuft of thistledown across the valley and away. It sits on a hilltop and hoots like an October owl in the dusk. It plays a tag with the wind. September is a changeling busy as a squirrel in a hickory tree, idle as a languid brook. It is summer’s ripeness and richness fulfilled.
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| | | Chinese translation:他在清晨的薄雾中走来，在午后的炎热中退去。 | Explanation:
九月秋天悄悄的降临
他在清晨的薄雾中走来，在午后的炎热中退去。
他轻轻的划过树梢，染红一片片树叶。
他骑在蓟花的冠毛上飘过山谷。
他坐在山顶上
像十月傍晚的猫头鹰一样吟唱。
他和风捉迷藏
九月的变化
快如核桃树上的松树
慢如安静的小河。
秋天满载着夏天的成熟和富有。
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1 hr confidence:   peer agreement (net): +1 | eng-chn translation, please look below 他在清晨的薄雾中走来，在午后的炎热中退去。
Explanation:
九月秋天悄悄的降临
他在清晨的薄雾中走来，在午后的炎热中退去。
他轻轻的划过树梢，染红一片片树叶。
他骑在蓟花的冠毛上飘过山谷。
他坐在山顶上
像十月傍晚的猫头鹰一样吟唱。
他和风捉迷藏
九月的变化
快如核桃树上的松树
慢如安静的小河。
秋天满载着夏天的成熟和富有。
Example sentence(s): | zhenhaoji
China
Local time: 21:28
Native speaker of:  Chinese
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| | Grading comment | thanks a lot, sorry for late points |
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Asker: Great! This was much more in depth and poetic than the translation I was able to do. I will make sure to award you Kudoz points once 24 hours have passed. Thanks again
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