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如何翻译成汉语合适呢?

Chinese translation: 其版图曾经涵盖现今伊朗及邻近地域,


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English term or phrase:如何翻译成汉语合适呢?
Chinese translation:其版图曾经涵盖现今伊朗及邻近地域,
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08:27 Mar 21, 2006
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Social Sciences - Psychology / history of psychology
English term or phrase: 如何翻译成汉语合适呢?
Occupying roughly the territory of present-day Iran and the immediately surrounding area, the ancient Persians were an Indo-European tribe that came into contact with India to the east, Russia and the Slavic tribes to the north, and Arabia and the Middle East to the west.

上面这句话中,Occupying roughly the territory of present-day Iran and the immediately surrounding area 部分不知如何翻译,请各位多多指教。非常感谢。
liukeyu
其版图曾经涵盖现今伊朗及邻近地域,
Explanation:
古代波斯人属印欧部族,其版图曾经涵盖现今伊朗及邻近地域,东联印度,北接俄罗斯和斯拉夫部族,西邻阿拉伯和中东。
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Ritchest
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Summary of answers provided
5 +4不要把前面-ing句子先译,否则句子会失去平衡
Last Hermit
3 +2其版图曾经涵盖现今伊朗及邻近地域,Ritchest
4 +1占领大约当今伊朗领土所在及其临近地区IC --
4 +1领有相当于今日的伊朗及其毗邻地区
Naikei Wong
3 +1tryPiang Liong Lai


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Explanation:
大约占现今伊朗领土及周围邻接地区

Piang Liong Lai
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Native speaker of: Native in ChineseChinese
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agree  IC --: You are really fast!!! : )
12 mins
  -> thanks
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16 mins   confidence: Answerer confidence 4/5Answerer confidence 4/5 peer agreement (net): +1
领有相当于今日的伊朗及其毗邻地区


Explanation:
consider also: 管辖相当于今日的伊朗及其毗邻地区

Persians were the people that "occupied" these lands.

But in fact it should be "ruled" because some form sustained government existed... occupation has implicit connotations for being temporary, unwanted, or hostile.

Naikei Wong
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agree  IC --: BUT, 相当于 can be less "rough" : ) ...
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27 mins   confidence: Answerer confidence 4/5Answerer confidence 4/5 peer agreement (net): +1
占领大约当今伊朗领土所在及其临近地区


Explanation:
以“占领 ”开句,便于连贯下面的句子。

用“临”因其有“立即”的意思,以应“immediately (surrounding)”


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Note added at 30 mins (2006-03-21 08:57:50 GMT)
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"occupied" 也可翻成 “占有”

占有大约当今伊朗领土所在及其临近地区

IC --
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agree  Naikei Wong: 不过我觉得“占”有一种先入为主的意思。。。bonne journee!
12 mins
  -> Domo!! They WERE "先入为主"!! Kon Niju Wa!
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2 hrs   confidence: Answerer confidence 5/5 peer agreement (net): +4
不要把前面-ing句子先译,否则句子会失去平衡


Explanation:
  古时候的波斯人,几乎雄踞当今整个伊朗和周边地区。他们是……

Last Hermit
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agree  Naikei Wong: expert -- and bypass/resolve the problem of "occupation" nicely
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agree  Xiangdong Zhuo: 好一个雄踞,出神入化
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agree  Xiaoping Fu: “雄踞”很好!但“几乎”似有不妥。“几乎”就是“差点儿”。而“roughly”意思是“大致”,可能差点儿,也可能多点儿,还可能这里差点儿那里多点儿。:-)
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agree  IC --: wonderful...and agree with Fu...
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其版图曾经涵盖现今伊朗及邻近地域,


Explanation:
古代波斯人属印欧部族,其版图曾经涵盖现今伊朗及邻近地域,东联印度,北接俄罗斯和斯拉夫部族,西邻阿拉伯和中东。

Ritchest
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agree  Xiaoping Fu
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agree  IC --
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