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17:35 Mar 30, 2008
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English to French translations [PRO]
Government / Politics
English term or phrase: Clear and timely external communications.....
Clear and timely external communications regarding Passport application processing times is essential, as is the distinction in processing times between Passport Canada and that of its Receiving Agents
mireille chartrand
Canada
Local time: 05:52
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Summary of answers provided
5 +1des communications extérieurs claires en temps opportun...
Cecile Frenette
4la mise à disposition, dans le cadre de la communication externe, d'informations claires...Aude Sylvain
4La communication externe claire et opportune en matière deGhyslaine LE NAGARD
4 -1communications extérieures concices et ponctuelles
swanda
3une communication claire au moment voulu...xxxCMJ_Trans
3de la communication claire et rapide (simple) pour les usagers
cjohnstone


  

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5 mins   confidence: Answerer confidence 4/5Answerer confidence 4/5 peer agreement (net): -1
clear and timely external communications.....
communications extérieures concices et ponctuelles


Explanation:
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swanda
Local time: 11:52
Specializes in field
Native speaker of: Native in FrenchFrench
PRO pts in category: 8

Peer comments on this answer (and responses from the answerer)
disagree  Ghyslaine LE NAGARD: concises et pontuelles n'ont rien à voir avec "clear and timely".
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6 mins   confidence: Answerer confidence 5/5 peer agreement (net): +1
clear and timely external communications.....
des communications extérieurs claires en temps opportun...


Explanation:


Cette phrase est également utilisée dans le document ci-dessous: voir référence


    Reference: http://www.psagency-agencefp.gc.ca/hr-rh/ve/dwcpagdm-rphgigd...
Cecile Frenette
Canada
Local time: 05:52
Native speaker of: French
PRO pts in category: 4

Peer comments on this answer (and responses from the answerer)
neutral  cjohnstone: pa trop ok si tu m'en veux pas!!!:)
7 mins
  -> Je profite toujours de l'expérience des autres... mais j'apprécie que l'on me dise la raison... pour laquelle ma traduction n'est pas juste!

agree  Christiane Bujold: devrait-on dire externe ou extérieures. Il me semble que sont les communications avec les organismes ou ministères externes... Le reste est tout a fait dans le ton des textes administratifs.
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11 mins   confidence: Answerer confidence 4/5Answerer confidence 4/5
clear and timely external communications.....
La communication externe claire et opportune en matière de


Explanation:
La communication externe claire et opportune en matière de/relative au délai de traitement de demande de passeport est essentielle...

Ghyslaine LE NAGARD
New Caledonia
Local time: 20:52
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Native speaker of: Native in FrenchFrench, Native in EnglishEnglish
PRO pts in category: 4
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13 mins   confidence: Answerer confidence 3/5Answerer confidence 3/5
clear and timely external communications.....
de la communication claire et rapide (simple) pour les usagers


Explanation:
pour moi inutile de dire externe... à la rigueur pour le public (si besoin le grand public, ou les administrés)
les administrés me paraît pas mal Mais bon à toi de voir selon contexte, mais externe ça franchement ça me plaît pas!!! :)

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Note added at 15 mins (2008-03-30 17:50:50 GMT)
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au lieu de communication (an afterthought) des informations, tt simplement me parait bien mieux

cjohnstone
France
Local time: 11:52
Specializes in field
Native speaker of: Native in FrenchFrench, Native in EnglishEnglish
PRO pts in category: 28

Peer comments on this answer (and responses from the answerer)
neutral  Aude Sylvain: D'accord pr "informations" (désolée j'ai répondu avant d'avoir vu ta note), mais je pense qu'il faut garder "communication externe", qui est le terme consacré (http://www.google.com/search?client=safari&rls=en&q=communic... externe&ie=UTF-8&oe=UTF-8).
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21 mins   confidence: Answerer confidence 3/5Answerer confidence 3/5
clear and timely external communications.....
une communication claire au moment voulu...


Explanation:
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xxxCMJ_Trans
Local time: 11:52
Works in field
Native speaker of: Native in EnglishEnglish
PRO pts in category: 138
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31 mins   confidence: Answerer confidence 4/5Answerer confidence 4/5
clear and timely external communications.....
la mise à disposition, dans le cadre de la communication externe, d'informations claires...


Explanation:

... et appropriées/opportunes

or
"la transmission/la fourniture, dans le cadre de la communication externe, d'informations claires et appropriées/opportunes"


A few more ideas...





Aude Sylvain
France
Local time: 11:52
Specializes in field
Native speaker of: Native in FrenchFrench
PRO pts in category: 12
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