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Satz

German translation: [sentence]

04:32 Nov 9, 2003
English to German translations [PRO]
Law/Patents / Klageschrift
English term or phrase: Satz
Insbesondere das markierte Satzende bereitet mir hier Schwierigkeiten:

The defendants’ collective action in continuing to design, formulate, market, manufacture, distribute and sell PPA long after they knew of the dangerous propensities of their products containing PPA, **creates a factual and legal nexus between all cases**.

Ich würde den Satz so übersetzen:

Die Tatsache, dass die beklagten Parteien in der Entwicklung, Formulierung, Vermarktung, Herstellung, Vertrieb und Verkauf von PPA zusammenarbeiteten, und das lange Zeit, nachdem sie von den gesundheitsschädigenden Eigenschaften ihrer PPA-haltigen Produkte Kenntnis genommen hatten, bildet die Grundlage der rechtlichen Verbindung beider Fälle.

Ist das in Ordnung, oder kann man das besser formulieren?
Olaf Reibedanz
Colombia
Local time: 20:05
German translation:[sentence]
Explanation:
Ich finde deine Lösung in Ordnung, würde aber persönlich näher am Original bleiben (ist bei juristischen Texten immer ratsam):

Durch [the defendants’ collective action in continuing to design, formulate, market, manufacture, distribute and sell PPA long after they knew of the dangerous propensities of their products containing PPA] ergibt sich ein faktischer und juristischer Zusammenhang zwischen allen Fällen.
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NGK
United States
Local time: 20:05
Grading comment
Vielen Dank, Norbert - ja, deine Formulierung ist besser.
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satz
[sentence]


Explanation:
Ich finde deine Lösung in Ordnung, würde aber persönlich näher am Original bleiben (ist bei juristischen Texten immer ratsam):

Durch [the defendants’ collective action in continuing to design, formulate, market, manufacture, distribute and sell PPA long after they knew of the dangerous propensities of their products containing PPA] ergibt sich ein faktischer und juristischer Zusammenhang zwischen allen Fällen.

NGK
United States
Local time: 20:05
Native speaker of: Native in EnglishEnglish, Native in GermanGerman
PRO pts in pair: 1890
Grading comment
Vielen Dank, Norbert - ja, deine Formulierung ist besser.

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