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English to Indonesian translations [PRO] Art/Literary - Poetry & Literature / song lyric
English term or phrase:could bare
Mohon dibantu padanan katanya, konteksnya lirik lagu legendaris The Police (Sting)
MESSAGE IN A BOTTLE THE POLICE
The Police (Sting)
Just another castaway, on an island lost at sea
Another lonely day, no one here but me
More lonely days than any man *could bare*
Rescue need be near, or I'll fall into despair
C#m - A - / B - F# - // (8x)
C: I'll send an S.O.S. to the world
I'll send an S.O.S. to the world
I hope that someone gets my, I hope that someone gets my,
I hope that someone gets my,
Message in a bottle
Message in a bottle
A - - - / D - E - / x2 / F#m - - - / D - - - / x2 / x2 /
C#m - - - / A - Ab - / x2 / x2 / x2 //
A year has past since I wrote my note
I should have known right from the start
Only hope can keep me together
Love can mend your life, but love can break your heart
C: I'll send an S.O.S. to the world
I'll send an S.O.S. to the world
I hope that someone gets my, I hope that someone gets my,
I hope that someone gets my,
Message in the bottle
Message in the bottle
Walked out this morning, don't believe what I saw
A hundred billion bottles washed up on the shore
Seems I'm not alone at being alone
A hundred billion castaways looking for a cause
C: I'll send an S.O.S. to the world
I'll send an S.O.S. to the world
I hope that someone gets my, I hope that someone gets my,
I hope that someone gets my,
Message in the bottle
Message in the bottle
T: Sending out an S.O.S.
Sending out an S.O.S.
Sending out an S.O.S.
Sending out an S.O.S.
setuju, kalau kita nonton film Mr. Bean, tampaknya orang Inggris suka menampilkan aksen suara berat, mungkin suara penyanyi tenor (seriosa), kesannya bangsawan kali :) bare ini efeknya mungkin seperti itu. Kalau menurut saya "someone gets my" wajar aja, someone = seseorang tentu get-ya pakai s, "my" itu ada terusannya "my Message in a bottle", cuma dipotong koma.
IMO "bare" di sini adalah stylistic. Memang ada kata "bare" dalam pengertian seperti yg dijelaskan Erich, tapi artinya tidak sesuai konteks, sedangkan kata "bare" sebagai past tense tdk cocok di sini krn. tidak benar secara grammar. Bdgk: someone gets my
Sebenarnya saya inginkan padanan kata yang puitis, lebih dari ketimbang maknanya semata, mungkin bisa dicarikan bahasanya Rendra atau mungkin Iwan Fals atau siapa lah maksudnya yang lebih negndonesia gitu lho, bahasa daerah juga bisa dipertimbangkan
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yang dapat ditanggung
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-------------------------------------------------- Note added at 29 mins (2007-10-31 04:29:20 GMT) --------------------------------------------------
kesepian yang lebih dari "yang dapat ditanggung" oleh seseorang
Hengky Chiok United States Local time: 20:03 Works in field Native speaker of: Indonesian PRO pts in category: 10
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Thanks semuanya saya pilih yang ini, cuma saya bikin sedikit lebih puitis
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peer agreement (net): +6