may our hearts burn for love of christ

Latin translation: Utinam corda nostra pro Christi amore ardeant !

11:25 May 7, 2001
English to Latin translations [Non-PRO]
English term or phrase: may our hearts burn for love of christ
I am doing a concert, and want this as the title of the programme in Latin. Can you help?
michael
Latin translation:Utinam corda nostra pro Christi amore ardeant !
Explanation:
utinam = may
corda = hearts
nostra = our
pro = for
Christi = of Christ
amore = love
ardeant = burn
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Carole Reade-Kentros
Local time: 17:32
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Hi,

Sorry for taking so long, had to reaply to get a new password.

Many thanks for the translation.

I only have two fears, which perhaps you could dispell or provide an alternative for the words.

1) Utinam does not convey the idea of a 'plead', but more the idea of 'possibility'?

2) "ardeant" seems a little ordinary?, where as I really want to get across the idea of being inflamed, ferociously burning sort of thing!

Let me know if these fears are entirely misplaced, - I'd be tremendously greatful.

Thanks,

Michael

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naUtinam corda nostra pro Christi amore ardeant !
Carole Reade-Kentros
nakind request !
Carole Reade-Kentros
nakind request !
Carole Reade-Kentros
naardescant
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Utinam corda nostra pro Christi amore ardeant !


Explanation:
utinam = may
corda = hearts
nostra = our
pro = for
Christi = of Christ
amore = love
ardeant = burn


    long years of Latin in high school !!
Carole Reade-Kentros
Local time: 17:32
PRO pts in pair: 4
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Hi,

Sorry for taking so long, had to reaply to get a new password.

Many thanks for the translation.

I only have two fears, which perhaps you could dispell or provide an alternative for the words.

1) Utinam does not convey the idea of a 'plead', but more the idea of 'possibility'?

2) "ardeant" seems a little ordinary?, where as I really want to get across the idea of being inflamed, ferociously burning sort of thing!

Let me know if these fears are entirely misplaced, - I'd be tremendously greatful.

Thanks,

Michael
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kind request !


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kind request !


Explanation:
if my answer was of any help to you, can you award me some points please ? It would be nice to see that you did read my translation !

Carole Reade-Kentros
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ardescant


Explanation:
Hi Michael ! Let me assuage your fears !

1) "Utinam" doesn't convey at all the idea of "possibility", but does convey
the idea of "plead", "pray". As a matter of fact, the exact meaning is :
"may the heavens/the gods/God" ...grant/give us/me this or that

2) As for "ardeo, ere, arsi, arsurus", it means :
first meaning = to be on fire, to burn
second meaning = (proper sense and figurative sense as well) to shine, be radiant, be ablaze, be aglow, blaze
third meaning = (figurative) to burn with desire/love/hatred/ ... those kinds of
feelings

I guess you want the third meaning.
So may I suggest that you use the verb "ardesco, ere" instead of "ardeo" ?
It has only one meaning =
to become inflamed/impassioned

let's conjugate it = ardescant
Utinam corda nostra pro Christi amore ardescant !

Hoping this will answer your questions !
Have a great weekend !

Carole





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