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18:58 Jul 14, 2001 |
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| Selected response from: Ramona Ali Local time: 17:11 | ||||||
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Membenarkan anda membuat dan mengedit senarai mel peribadi anda untuk mesej. Explanation: Let me assume that you are in the Message section (SMS) of a mobile phone. Or you can try this phrase "Membolehkan anda membuat dan mengedit senarai mel peribadi anda untuk mesej" |
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Membenarkan anda cipta & ubah senarai kiriman peribadi mesej Explanation: Considering the characters are limited, I think you've shortened it as much as it can be shortened, except that I think you've accidentally translated "and" into "atau", instead of "dan" which can be shortened further into "&". Another thing, your translation: "senarai mesej kiriman peribadi" sounds like the word personal refers to message rather than list, i.e. it sounds like message list rather than mailing list. So I've changed the words round a bit. |
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Membolehkan anda membuat dan mengedit senarai mesej peribadi anda Explanation: "Membolehkan anda membuat dan mengedit senarai mesej peribadi anda" (9 words) ...I have excluded the word "mailing" here as I feel it is redundant. It sounds better too. Others will probably have a better suggestion than mine. |
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Untuk cipta & ubah senarai kiriman peribadi bagi mesej Explanation: Just another alternative to try and shorten the beginning to fit the word "bagi" in at the end (for clarity). |
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