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00:27 Mar 19, 2007
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English to Spanish translations [PRO]
Poetry & Literature / agradecería si me ayudaran con esta frase, porque no me gusta como suena literlamente
English term or phrase: She walks in the room, your loves closed
She's breathtaking but so much more
She walks in the room, your loves closed
Making you never want to breathe again
Her boyfriend has got so much dough
daydreamer
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Summary of answers provided
5 +1ella entra/llega (al lugar), tus pulmones se cierran/cerrados
kironne
4 +1cuando ella se aparece, tu amor queda sellado
Lydia De Jorge


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22 mins   confidence: Answerer confidence 4/5Answerer confidence 4/5 peer agreement (net): +1
she walks in the room, your loves closed
cuando ella se aparece, tu amor queda sellado


Explanation:
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Lydia De Jorge
United States
Local time: 10:02
Specializes in field
Native speaker of: Native in SpanishSpanish, Native in EnglishEnglish
PRO pts in category: 354

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agree  Swatchka
16 hrs
  -> thanks again!
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2 hrs   confidence: Answerer confidence 5/5 peer agreement (net): +1
she walks in the room, your lungs closed
ella entra/llega (al lugar), tus pulmones se cierran/cerrados


Explanation:


Hi, I think your version might be wrong.

I found these links with lyrics for Mario Vazquez's song:
[...]
01. Gallery

Ohhh (Oh) Ohhh yea (Oh)

Verse 1:
God Broke the mold when he made this one I know
She's breath taking but so much more
She walks in the room your LUNGS closed
Making you never wanna breath again
Her boyfriend has got so much dough
So much ice his neck and wrist froze
Is he faithful to her? Hell No
But she chose to be with him , shorty

Hook:
Tell me is it money worth your soul
Tell me what's the reason that you hold on
When you know that dude
Has a whole wall of'em just like you
And Girl your just way to fine
Got to be treated as one of a kind, Girl
Use your mind
Don't be just another dime because
[...]
http://forevermario.com/lyrics.php


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So my suggestion would be:

"ella entra, tus pulmones se cierran
y hacen que no quieras respirar nunca más..."

"ella llega al lugar, tus pulmones cerrados
y hacen que no quieras respirar nunca más..."

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GALLERY LYRICS :: MARIO VAZQUEZ
She's breathtaking but so much more She walks in the room, your lungs close Making you never want to breathe again Her boyfriend has got so much dough ...
http://www.hotget.com/lyrics/Mario-Vazquez-Gallery-lyrics,19...

Skyblog de nico93420 : NiCo
She's breath taking but so much more She walks in the room, your loves closed Making you never want to breathe again Her boyfriend has got so much dough ...
http://nico93420.skyblog.com/

Lyrics for "Mario Vasquez ft. Moc - Gallery" by Moc Five ...
She's breathtaking but so much more She walks in the room, your loves closed, Making you never want to breathe again, Her boyfriend has got so much dough ...
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/Lyrics.cfm?BandID=140239&son...

mariovazquez.us | mariovazquez.nu | forevermario.com | Forever ...
She's breath taking but so much more She walks in the room your Lungs closed Making you never wanna breath again Her boyfriend has got so much dough ...
http://forevermario.com/lyrics.php



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AZLyrics.com Search: The Beauty Room
Gallery" God broke the mold, When he made this one I know She`s breathtaking but so much more She walks in the room, your lungs close Making you never want ...
http://search.azlyrics.com/cgi-bin/azseek.cgi?q=The Beauty R...

AZLyrics.com Search: Mario Vazquez
MARIO VAZQUEZ LYRICS "Gallery" God broke the mold, When he made this one I know She`s breathtaking but so much more She walks in the room, your lungs close ...
http://search.azlyrics.com/cgi-bin/azseek.cgi?q=Mario Vazque...

MARIO VAZQUEZ LYRICS - Gallery
She walks in the room, your lungs close Making you never want to breathe again Her boyfriend has got so much dough So much ice his neck and wrist froze ...
http://www.lyricstop.com/g/gallery-mariovazquez.html

Lyrics - mario vazquez All songs, words of songs FREE, At lyrics ...
God broke the mould when he made this one I know She is breath-taking but so much more She walks in the room, your lungs close Making you never wanna breath ...
http://www.lyricsandsongs.com/lyrics/MARIO_VAZQUEZ.html

t2the3h11's AIM Page
She walks in the room, your lungs close Making you never want to breathe again The drops of rain they fall all over This awkward silence makes me crazy ...
http://www.aimpages.com/t2the3h11/profile.html

Phorum :: AZLyrics.com - Request Lyrics Forum :: Gallery lyrics
She walks in the room, your lungs close confused smiley. Options: Reply To This Message•Quote This Message•Report This Message. Re: Gallery lyrics ...
http://www.requestlyrics.com/read.php?1,671879,671909,quote=...

www.myspace.com/theofabregas
She's breath-taking but soo much more, she walks in the room your lungs close making u never want to breathe again. Love ur song babe. ...
http://profile.myspace.com/index.cfm?fuseaction=user.viewpro...

www.myspace.com/karyssbooth
She walks in the room, your lungs close Making you never wanna breathe again" you know I can make you happy,I could change your life, If you give me that ...
http://profile.myspace.com/index.cfm?fuseaction=user.viewpro...

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God broke the mold, When he made this one I know She's breathtaking but so much more She walks in the room, your lungs close Making you never want to ...
http://www.onlylyrics.com/correct.php?id=31403

Mikao's World: 09/01/2006 - 10/01/2006
Gallery - Mario Vasquez - "God broke the mold when he made this one i know, she walks in the room your lungs close making you never wanna breathe again" ...
http://mikao.blogspot.com/2006_09_01_archive.html

x3 Tracey Baby __ <TracyBaybee>
She walks in the room, your lungs close Making you never wanna breathe again Her boyfriend has got so much dough So much ice his neck and wrists froze ...
http://www.bebo.com/Profile.jsp?MemberId=51649404 -

Gallery Spanglish version :: Mario Vazquez « idolforums.com
She walks in the room your lungs close Making you never wanna breathe again Her boyfriend has got so much dough So much ice his neck and wrists froze ...
http://idolforums.com/index.php?showtopic=412587&view=getlas...

kironne
Chile
Local time: 11:02
Specializes in field
Native speaker of: English
PRO pts in category: 52

Peer comments on this answer (and responses from the answerer)
agree  patricia scott: Kironne, why don't you Ask asker to make this clear?
6 hrs
  -> You're right, Patricia, I will, although I verified with specialized websites that say it's "lungs close".

neutral  Lydia De Jorge: Kironne, look again-I went to several sites and they all say LOVES. saludos
14 hrs
  -> Thanks, Lydia. There do seem to be two versions of the lyrics out there, but after checking official Mario Vazquez fan websites, I'm absolutely sure the lyrics go LUNGS. And the following line does make sense, doesn't it?
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