02:28 Nov 28, 2000 |
French to English translations [Non-PRO] Bus/Financial | ||||
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The company/L'enterprise -: your ally at the heart of the New Economy Explanation: You may translate it almost literally: ...your ally at the heart of the New Economy HTH |
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XXX - Your ally at the very centre of the new economy Explanation: It's a matter of nuances and taste MMI |
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XXX - your business ally right at the heart of the new economy Explanation: Another possibility. Nikki |
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"Venture- Your ally at the heart of the new economy" Explanation: Or "Business- Your ally within the new economy" "Entreprise" can be translated with many different expressions (see site below). I think one of the two above would be your best choice in this instance. Just a comment: I am surprised that the French original put "allié" in masculine gender. "Entreprise" is feminine, therefore the sentence should really read "L'entreprise-votre alliée au coeur de la nouvelle économie." Your clients might appreciate the suggestion. Reference: http://www.granddictionnaire.com/_fs_global_01.htm |
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The company-your partner at the heart of the new economy Explanation: entreprise=company if it's a specific company or business if it means general business |
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The Company - Your Partner at the Hub of the New Economy Explanation: Just a matter of what sounds best in the context, but I think the word "hub" makes the reader feel more wanted! |
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