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French: commande orientée

English translation: commissioned (creation/work/order)







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French term or phrase:commande orientée
English translation:commissioned (creation/work/order)
Entered by:Dana Pottratz
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French to English translations [PRO]
Marketing - Cosmetics, Beauty / Perfumery
French term or phrase: commande orientée
Here's the context:

"XXX (name of perfume) est le seul parfum pour lequel YYY (name of perfume designer) ait accédé aux souhaits de ZZZ (name of perfume house director). Il s’agit en effet d’une commande orientée. ZZZ a demandé à YYY de composer un parfum qui leur ressemblerait, et il a été rapidement conquis par ce que YYY lui a préparé.

Thanks in advance!
Dana Pottratz
France
Clarification request(s) and response
MatthewLaSon: 4:27pm May 18, 2008: Answer to your comment: It's still a "custom-designed perfume", even though it's for a perfume house, not an individual.

commissioned (creation/work)
Explanation:
Turning the sentence in a slightly different manner:
This perfume is a commissioned creation, this is a commissioned perfume...

I think that this conveys the idea that the designer had to comply with some guidelines, instructions, i.e. could not create freely, following his sole personal inspiration.

see GDT:
Domaine(s) :
- édition
français
anglais
de commande
commissioned
Sous-entrée(s) :
quasi-synonyme(s)
commandé
_______________

refs. :

- There are also several commercial spin offs both the Supporters Club and the football club are looking to exploit with this news (...) we are announcing new lines of luxury souvenirs including vintage champagnes and a specially **commissioned Perfume**, Eau de Gas
http://www.bristolroverssc.co.uk/News/1/Cardiff__Rovers_Grou...

- The project’s final outcome eventually manifested itself as a CD release, with each CD being accompanied by an especially** commissioned perfume** based on ...
www.davidmuth.net/selected-projects

- It doesn't strike me as terribly unusual that an author -- even of a book **commissioned** by a public educational institution -- might be ...
www.earlham.edu/~peters/fos/2008/ 04/no-access-to-college-commissioned-book.html

- Books at the Limit, Carol Grossman - ABAA Antiquarian Booksellers ...
He started out with originally **commissioned** book design and artwork by such artists as Valenti Angelo and Arthur Szyk......
www.abaa.org/books/abaa/news_fly?code=38

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Note added at 1 day2 hrs (2008-05-18 15:09:05 GMT)
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other refs. stressing the role of the commissioner :

- Authors of the selected papers must give their permission before their papers are reprinted in the new document.(...) At the client's request and/or the Editor's discretion, a bridging article or editorial may be commissioned *to improve the continuity or broaden the perspective of the document.*
http://www.mja.com.au/public/publish/service.html

- If ''The Bulgari Connection'' sells well, publishers and booksellers expect more like it. ''I think this is fantastic,'' said Jane Friedman (...). ''It gives me a lot of ideas -- what better way to spread the word than to have a commissioned book? *And if you are going to talk about jewelry you might as well talk about Bulgari*.''
http://query.nytimes.com/gst/fullpage.html?res=9F00E5D61F30F...
Selected response from:

Aude Sylvain
France
Note from asker to answerer
Thanks. This was a tough one and your answer seemed to be the closest to the French in this specific context.
3 KudoZ points were awarded for this answer



Summary of answers provided
4 +1produced to orderxxxCMJ_Trans
3 +2order made to measure
helena barham
3 +1custom-designed order (individually concocted perfume)
MatthewLaSon
4tailored order
Anne-Sophie Cardinal
4bespoke order
Tricolor
3commissioned (creation/work)
Aude Sylvain
3order targetted/aimed at a specific market/requirementsbcsantos


  

Answers

3 mins   confidence: Answerer confidence 3/5Answerer confidence 3/5
order targetted/aimed at a specific market/requirements

Explanation:
Hope this helps

bcsantos
Gibraltar
Works in field
Native speaker of: Native in EnglishEnglish
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9 mins   confidence: Answerer confidence 4/5Answerer confidence 4/5
tailored order

Explanation:
Perhaps this highlights the fact that the order was specially designed for that one client.

Anne-Sophie Cardinal
Canada
Works in field
Native speaker of: Native in FrenchFrench
Notes to answerer
Asker: The order was not for a specific client, it was the perfume house that decided it wanted to market a specific type of perfume and gave the perfume designer "instructions" about what they wanted.

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18 mins   confidence: Answerer confidence 4/5Answerer confidence 4/5 peer agreement (net): +1
produced to order

Explanation:
sic

xxxCMJ_Trans
France
Native speaker of: Native in EnglishEnglish
PRO pts in category: 16

Peer comments on this answer (and responses from the answerer)
agree Dr Jones
58 mins
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1 hr   confidence: Answerer confidence 3/5Answerer confidence 3/5 peer agreement (net): +2
order made to measure

Explanation:
tailor made, made to order

helena barham
France
Works in field
Native speaker of: Native in EnglishEnglish
Notes to answerer
Asker: The order was not for a specific client, it was the perfume house that decided it wanted to market a specific type of perfume and gave the perfume designer "instructions" about what they wanted.


Peer comments on this answer (and responses from the answerer)
agree Ingeborg Gowans: yes, tailor-made/ would have been my suggestion, too
58 mins

agree B D Finch: tailor-made (not made to measure)
1 hr
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4 hrs   confidence: Answerer confidence 4/5Answerer confidence 4/5
bespoke order

Explanation:
Definition of bespoke: "tailored or designed to the client's requirements"

Tricolor
United Kingdom
Specializes in field
Native speaker of: Native in EnglishEnglish
PRO pts in category: 8
Notes to answerer
Asker: The order was not for a specific client, it was the perfume house that decided it wanted to market a specific type of perfume and gave the perfume designer "instructions" about what they wanted.

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5 hrs   confidence: Answerer confidence 3/5Answerer confidence 3/5 peer agreement (net): +1
custom-designed order (individually concocted perfume)

Explanation:
Hello,

This is what I'd say.

I hope it helps.


    Reference: http://news.bbc.co.uk/1/hi/in_depth/sci_tech/2000/dot_life/1...
MatthewLaSon
United States
Works in field
Native speaker of: Native in EnglishEnglish
PRO pts in category: 20
Notes to answerer
Asker: The order was not for a specific client, it was the perfume house that decided it wanted to market a specific type of perfume and gave the perfume designer "instructions" about what they wanted.


Peer comments on this answer (and responses from the answerer)
agree ormiston: I think this sounds best here too
15 hrs
  -> Thanks, ormiston!
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1 day2 hrs   confidence: Answerer confidence 3/5Answerer confidence 3/5
commissioned (creation/work)

Explanation:
Turning the sentence in a slightly different manner:
This perfume is a commissioned creation, this is a commissioned perfume...

I think that this conveys the idea that the designer had to comply with some guidelines, instructions, i.e. could not create freely, following his sole personal inspiration.

see GDT:
Domaine(s) :
- édition
français
anglais
de commande
commissioned
Sous-entrée(s) :
quasi-synonyme(s)
commandé
_______________

refs. :

- There are also several commercial spin offs both the Supporters Club and the football club are looking to exploit with this news (...) we are announcing new lines of luxury souvenirs including vintage champagnes and a specially **commissioned Perfume**, Eau de Gas
http://www.bristolroverssc.co.uk/News/1/Cardiff__Rovers_Grou...

- The project’s final outcome eventually manifested itself as a CD release, with each CD being accompanied by an especially** commissioned perfume** based on ...
www.davidmuth.net/selected-projects

- It doesn't strike me as terribly unusual that an author -- even of a book **commissioned** by a public educational institution -- might be ...
www.earlham.edu/~peters/fos/2008/ 04/no-access-to-college-commissioned-book.html

- Books at the Limit, Carol Grossman - ABAA Antiquarian Booksellers ...
He started out with originally **commissioned** book design and artwork by such artists as Valenti Angelo and Arthur Szyk......
www.abaa.org/books/abaa/news_fly?code=38

--------------------------------------------------
Note added at 1 day2 hrs (2008-05-18 15:09:05 GMT)
--------------------------------------------------

other refs. stressing the role of the commissioner :

- Authors of the selected papers must give their permission before their papers are reprinted in the new document.(...) At the client's request and/or the Editor's discretion, a bridging article or editorial may be commissioned *to improve the continuity or broaden the perspective of the document.*
http://www.mja.com.au/public/publish/service.html

- If ''The Bulgari Connection'' sells well, publishers and booksellers expect more like it. ''I think this is fantastic,'' said Jane Friedman (...). ''It gives me a lot of ideas -- what better way to spread the word than to have a commissioned book? *And if you are going to talk about jewelry you might as well talk about Bulgari*.''
http://query.nytimes.com/gst/fullpage.html?res=9F00E5D61F30F...


Aude Sylvain
France
Specializes in field
Native speaker of: Native in FrenchFrench
PRO pts in category: 7
Note from asker to answerer
Thanks. This was a tough one and your answer seemed to be the closest to the French in this specific context.
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