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peignage

English translation: a comb-through/to comb through


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French term or phrase:peignage
English translation:a comb-through/to comb through
Entered by: gallagy2
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21:16 Dec 19, 2011
French to English translations [PRO]
Bus/Financial - Finance (general)
French term or phrase: peignage
This is the CEO of a major French insurer speaking. I think the "comb" metaphor will work in English too, but any snazzy ideas out there?

Context:
Il y a donc un « peignage » du portefeuille à effectuer pour voir s'il y a des lignes de métiers, des produits, parfois même des territoires sur lesquels la rentabilité ou les perspectives ne sont pas satisfaisantes.

Help much appreciated, as always!
Idna
Local time: 13:26
a comb-through
Explanation:

www.russell.com/institutional/investment.../overlay_service...

or rephrase using a verb as below

We comb through your portfolio in search of slippage—inefficiencies that lead to lower return and higher risk. Through the use of a derivatives overlay, we can ...


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comb through something to search carefully among things

Researchers have been combing through data files trying to detect problems.
http://www.macmillandictionary.com/dictionary/british/comb-t...

another option is to "sift/go through something with a fine tooth comb"

idioms.thefreedictionary.com/go+over+with+a+fine-tooth+comb


go over something with a fine-tooth comb and search something with a fine-tooth comb; go through something with a fine-tooth comb. Fig. to search through ...


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dictionary.cambridge.org/dictionary/british/fine-tooth-comb


Definition. with a fine-tooth comb. If you go through something with a fine-tooth comb, you examine it in great detail and with great care. We have gone through ...


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thanks Idna. Glad to have helped and Seasons Greetings.
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gallagy2
Ireland
Grading comment
Yes, using the phrasal verb "to comb through" was it. Thanks for your help.
4 KudoZ points were awarded for this answer



Summary of answers provided
4 +1a comb-throughgallagy2
4turn it roundxxxBourth
4comb-outrkillings
4screeningFrancis Marche


  

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7 hrs   confidence: Answerer confidence 4/5Answerer confidence 4/5
screening


Explanation:
If you care for a piece of advice from a French speaker:
When you have a choice, translate straight ideas, not words (and use plain English and avoid seeing "metaphores" where there is none).

Francis Marche
Cambodia
Local time: 18:26
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PRO pts in category: 28
Notes to answerer
Asker: I don't see the problem with translating the metaphor here (and it IS a metaphor, i.e. figure of speech in which a word or phrase that ordinarily designates one thing is used to designate another). Sometimes they don't translate well, and in that case I translate the idea, as you recommend. But this one happens to function in English, as the other answers attest. Furthermore, I wouldn't use screening here, but thanks for trying.

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9 hrs   confidence: Answerer confidence 4/5Answerer confidence 4/5
comb-out


Explanation:
You wanna comb those underperformers right out of your hair. So to speak.

rkillings
United States
Local time: 04:26
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11 hrs   confidence: Answerer confidence 4/5Answerer confidence 4/5
turn it round


Explanation:
Il y a donc un « peignage » du portefeuille à effectuer becomes "You wanna go through your portfolio with a fine-tooth(ed) comb".

xxxBourth
Local time: 13:26
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34 mins   confidence: Answerer confidence 4/5Answerer confidence 4/5 peer agreement (net): +1
a comb-through


Explanation:

www.russell.com/institutional/investment.../overlay_service...

or rephrase using a verb as below

We comb through your portfolio in search of slippage—inefficiencies that lead to lower return and higher risk. Through the use of a derivatives overlay, we can ...


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Note added at 7 hrs (2011-12-20 05:03:13 GMT)
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comb through something to search carefully among things

Researchers have been combing through data files trying to detect problems.
http://www.macmillandictionary.com/dictionary/british/comb-t...

another option is to "sift/go through something with a fine tooth comb"

idioms.thefreedictionary.com/go+over+with+a+fine-tooth+comb


go over something with a fine-tooth comb and search something with a fine-tooth comb; go through something with a fine-tooth comb. Fig. to search through ...


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Note added at 7 hrs (2011-12-20 05:05:21 GMT)
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dictionary.cambridge.org/dictionary/british/fine-tooth-comb


Definition. with a fine-tooth comb. If you go through something with a fine-tooth comb, you examine it in great detail and with great care. We have gone through ...


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Note added at 2 days17 hrs (2011-12-22 15:03:19 GMT) Post-grading
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thanks Idna. Glad to have helped and Seasons Greetings.

gallagy2
Ireland
Specializes in field
Native speaker of: Native in EnglishEnglish
PRO pts in category: 42
Grading comment
Yes, using the phrasal verb "to comb through" was it. Thanks for your help.

Peer comments on this answer (and responses from the answerer)
neutral  Francis Marche: Is this sentence, with "derivative overlay", etc. supposed to be a translation of French sentence quoted by the Asker ?
6 hrs
  -> Asker asked for translation of 1 word. I suggested rephrasing as verb. Thought it was clear

agree  xxxBourth: Oops, posted my knee-jerk first, then read more than just title words. "Fine-tooth comb" it should be, IMO. (talk about nit-picking, above!).
11 hrs
  -> thanks Bourth,
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Changes made by editors
Dec 22, 2011 - Changes made by gallagy2:
Edited KOG entrygallagy2's old entry - "peignage " => "a comb-through/to comb through"
Dec 22, 2011 - Changes made by gallagy2:
Created KOG entryKudoZ term => KOG term


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