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Bus/Financial - IT (Information Technology) / IT
French term or phrase: sentence
7.2.Facilité d’administration et d’exploitation
Une attention particulière sera portée à la simplicité et aux possibilités d’automatisation des tâches d’exploitation et d’administration, notamment :

is the sentence
which is followed by the following context:
§la gestion des comptes utilisateurs, des droits d’accès et de la personnalisation,
§la gestion des sauvegardes, des restaurations et du maintien de la cohérence des données,
§la mesure et l’optimisation des performances,
§la fourniture d’un dossier d’exploitation aux standards XXXXXX.

Can't quite figure out how to phrase this...

so far: 7.2.Administrative and operational capacity
Particular attention will be paid to the simplicity with which operating and administrative tasks are performed and the possibilities of automation, notably:
§Management of user accounts, access rights, and customization
§Management of data storage, recovery, and consistency
§Assessment and optimization of performances
§Provision of a problem file according to XXXXX standards

and that will be the last of it!
Meri Buettner
France
Clarification request(s) and response
Catherine Johnstone: 11:52am Mar 3, 2003: which bit do you want ? -
Meri Buettner (asker): 11:56am Mar 3, 2003: the first sentence under the heading 7.2 .....just above "is the sentence" - the rest is just what follows the sentences -

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Explanation:
7.2.Ease of administration and operation:
Particular attention will be paid to the simplicity with which operating and administrative tasks are performed and the possibilities of automation, notably....
Just start with ease of... The other portions of your attempt seem to be ok.
Selected response from:

Narasimhan Raghavan
India
Note from asker to answerer
Thanks!
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Summary of answers provided
5 +2See explanation
Narasimhan Raghavan
5Ease of Administration and Operation
Jane Lamb-Ruiz
4Special attention shall be paid to simplicity and to
Parrot
4management of backups, restores and data integrity
William Stein


  

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29 mins   confidence: Answerer confidence 4/5Answerer confidence 4/5
management of backups, restores and data integrity

Explanation:
a "restore" means returning your computer to the state it was in [a restore point] before some problem occurred.
Judging by definition in granddictionnaire.com I'd say "dossier d'exploitation" is "user's manual"

Other than that, your suggestion looks okay to me.


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Domaine(s) : - informatique
traitement des données


français


dossier d'exploitation n. m.
Équivalent(s) :

Définition :
Document d'accompagnement d'un programme qui décrit les conditions pratiques d'utilisation de ce programme : liste des fichiers, procédures à mettre en œuvre...


Note(s) :
Ce dossier est destiné au personnel d'exploitation du service informatique.




William Stein
United States
Native speaker of: Native in EnglishEnglish
PRO pts in category: 8
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35 mins   confidence: Answerer confidence 4/5Answerer confidence 4/5
Special attention shall be paid to simplicity and to

Explanation:
the possibilities of automating operation and administrative tasks, notably:


    simple suggestion
Parrot
Spain
Works in field
Native speaker of: Native in EnglishEnglish
PRO pts in category: 18
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37 mins   confidence: Answerer confidence 5/5 peer agreement (net): +2
See explanation

Explanation:
7.2.Ease of administration and operation:
Particular attention will be paid to the simplicity with which operating and administrative tasks are performed and the possibilities of automation, notably....
Just start with ease of... The other portions of your attempt seem to be ok.

Narasimhan Raghavan
India
Specializes in field
Native speaker of: Native in TamilTamil
PRO pts in category: 12
Note from asker to answerer
Thanks!

Peer comments on this answer (and responses from the answerer)
agree HRiley: ...possibilities for automating operating and administrative tasks?
15 mins
  -> Yes, agreed.

agree Jacqueline McKay
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1 hr   confidence: Answerer confidence 5/5
Ease of Administration and Operation

Explanation:
Real IT English:
Special emphasis will be placed on the ease and possiblity of automating administrative and operating tasks.


Keeping it simple: the word simplicity doesn't sound right to me it's ease of administration and operation....


Jane Lamb-Ruiz
United States
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Native speaker of: Native in EnglishEnglish, Native in PortuguesePortuguese
PRO pts in category: 202
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