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Le roi de la notule

English translation: King of concision


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04:30 Sep 8, 2010
French to English translations [PRO]
Art/Literary - Journalism
French term or phrase: Le roi de la notule
This is someone's expression of themselves when they worked as a journalist. He specialised in short pithy articles (jut a few lines) that encapsualted everything. He was a film critic. I have found this word tricky, as a journalist myself, I was trying to think what would be the best term, and the best is"short paragraph" as this is only ever what an editor would say to you to write, do you think there might be another way to say it and any suggestions?
Sarah Robertson
United Kingdom
Local time: 19:33
English translation:King of concision
Explanation:
For its alliteration.

"I had considered myself the King of Concision. Then, I read Kevin Barber's The Century, which are exactly 100 words. This was on my mind when friend and ..."
womenspost.ca/blog/kevin-somers/why-fifty
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B D Finch
France
Local time: 20:33
Grading comment
This sounds the most English to me.

Thanks
4 KudoZ points were awarded for this answer



Summary of answers provided
4 +4ten-liner trafficker, five-liner pharoahxxxBourth
5Master of the Mini-review
kashew
4 +1sultan of the short and sweetRowan Morrell
4Captain Concise
JamesEUK
4King of concision
B D Finch
4King of Brevity
MaryAnn Diorio, PhD, MFA
4Ten-line(r) tsar
Wordeffect
4short note champion
Frensp
4Short memo wizardMichel F. Morin
3The king of the noteletpolyglot45
3the footnote kingxxxSMcG
1King/master of the nutshellConnor


Discussion entries: 1





  

Answers


19 mins   confidence: Answerer confidence 4/5Answerer confidence 4/5
short note champion


Explanation:
A suggestion as requested.

Frensp
Local time: 14:33
Native speaker of: Native in FrenchFrench
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46 mins   confidence: Answerer confidence 4/5Answerer confidence 4/5 peer agreement (net): +1
sultan of the short and sweet


Explanation:
Seems like this guy specialised in articles that were "short and sweet", hence my suggestion. I chose "sultan" because it's sort of in the same semantic area as "king" and starts with "s".

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Note added at 47 mins (2010-09-08 05:18:03 GMT)
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Maybe you could even go with "sheikh of the short and sweet", which has alliteration with "short" and assonance with "sweet".

Rowan Morrell
Local time: 06:33
Works in field
Native speaker of: Native in EnglishEnglish

Peer comments on this answer (and responses from the answerer)
agree  xxxBourth: You should have been with Dire Straits!
2 hrs
  -> Actually, their "Sultans of Swing" song was kind of at the back of my mind! Anyway, thanks Bourth.
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2 hrs   confidence: Answerer confidence 4/5Answerer confidence 4/5
Short memo wizard


Explanation:
Notule: petite note, courte publication... That's widely in use within French administration.
Pour "le roi", je suggère "wizard": as, champion, magicien... Mais "champ" peut aller aussi !





    Reference: http://www.absurditis.com/notule/800/
Michel F. Morin
France
Local time: 20:33
Specializes in field
Native speaker of: Native in FrenchFrench
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2 hrs   confidence: Answerer confidence 3/5Answerer confidence 3/5
The king of the notelet


Explanation:
why not ?

polyglot45
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3 hrs   confidence: Answerer confidence 4/5Answerer confidence 4/5 peer agreement (net): +4
ten-liner trafficker, five-liner pharoah


Explanation:
Or any other number, with or without alliteration.

AS IF what Iole thinks matters in the world of print Journalism. ... We get frackin' nascar coverage daily but a TEN-LINER for anything ...
sports.yahoo.com/.../Media-watch-Boston-treats-UFC-the-way-all-citie?...


However, there was one gentleman who wrote simultaneously for Hindu and Muslim newspapers. What he wrote in one paper, he rebutted in another. His name was Waqar Ambalvi. Dharm Vir used to say that he had never seen a poet who could wrote impromptu poetry at Ambalvi's speed.
As Ambalvi used to come to office, he would give a two-paisa bit to the peon in the stairs to fetch him some cigarettes. But before the peon could return, he would hand in his TEN-LINER, and on his way back the peon would give him the cigarettes, halfway down the staircase.
http://www.sajjanlahore.org/corners/zim/lastman/part4/hindup...

Hands up all those who admire a multi-page tortuous mathematical proof more than an elegant TEN LINER. Hands up all those who prefer a ...
patentlyo.com/patent/2008/11/obligation-to-p.html

Afghanistan have different reason than a TEN—LINER in a magazine." ... House at the journalist carelessness may be genuine. But it ...
www.cod.edu/people/faculty/yearman/.../Berlin_001635_18May2...

Video journalist Vaughan Smith, a former army captain, was embedded with the .... yet another notification, a ten-liner: "Oh not another ...
council.smallwarsjournal.com/showthread.php?p=94276

Amazing how a 500-word story can be cut down to a brief TEN-LINER because of lack of space given to the editor that day. ...
wc.arizona.edu/papers/91/144/17_4_m.html

A FIVE LINER that told us nothing at all about the movie! ..... But I guess, since the writer/director was a journalist, she focused on what ...
passionforcinema.com/peepli-live/

than British military historian-journalist-author Max Hastings. ... are flawless whether they be a small chapter or simple FIVE LINER. ...
articles.latimes.com/1986-03-30/books/bk-1484_1_max-hastings

Or work in his name. If he was Sylvain, he could be "seven-liner Sylvain". Or "five-liner Phil". "Eight-liner Olivia".

xxxBourth
Local time: 20:33
Native speaker of: Native in EnglishEnglish
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Peer comments on this answer (and responses from the answerer)
agree  Carol Gullidge: I like "ten/five-liner", but feel that any alliteration is probably unnecessary. Having said that, the 1st suggestion does have a nice ring to it!
24 mins
  -> Just for the hellovit!

agree  Wordeffect
27 mins

neutral  xxxSMcG: nice, but a bit obscure, I had to read this to understand it.
1 hr

agree  kashew: 5 goes with "a few lines" better than 10!
2 hrs
  -> Depends how wide your column-inches are!

agree  Sandra Mouton
1 day3 hrs
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3 hrs   confidence: Answerer confidence 4/5Answerer confidence 4/5
Ten-line(r) tsar


Explanation:
Just another idea.

Wordeffect
France
Local time: 20:33
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5 hrs   confidence: Answerer confidence 3/5Answerer confidence 3/5
the footnote king


Explanation:
Might as well pitch in! footnote in the double sense of something that is of lesser importance (as in a footnote in history) and also a short annotation (notule).

xxxSMcG
Belgium
Local time: 20:33
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5 hrs   confidence: Answerer confidence 4/5Answerer confidence 4/5
King of concision


Explanation:
For its alliteration.

"I had considered myself the King of Concision. Then, I read Kevin Barber's The Century, which are exactly 100 words. This was on my mind when friend and ..."
womenspost.ca/blog/kevin-somers/why-fifty

B D Finch
France
Local time: 20:33
Works in field
Native speaker of: Native in EnglishEnglish
PRO pts in category: 4
Grading comment
This sounds the most English to me.

Thanks
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5 hrs   confidence: Answerer confidence 5/5
Master of the Mini-review


Explanation:
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Note added at 6 heures (2010-09-08 11:06:36 GMT)
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Or, Prince of Pith!
Or, Queen of Quintessence!!

kashew
France
Local time: 20:33
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7 hrs   confidence: Answerer confidence 4/5Answerer confidence 4/5
King of Brevity


Explanation:
Literally, of course, this phrase means "king of the short note". In journalism, however, brevity is usually king, so I thought I'd offer this translation as a possibility.

MaryAnn Diorio, PhD, MFA
Local time: 14:33
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Native speaker of: Native in ItalianItalian, Native in EnglishEnglish
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14 hrs   confidence: Answerer confidence 1/5Answerer confidence 1/5
King/master of the nutshell


Explanation:
just for fun

Connor
Local time: 20:33
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1 day9 hrs   confidence: Answerer confidence 4/5Answerer confidence 4/5
Captain Concise


Explanation:
Lots of nice ideas here.

JamesEUK
Native speaker of: English
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