11:23 Oct 2, 2011
I'm afraid I'd probably go back and replace "notified" with a different word, in these circumstances, because I can't think of an elegant way to rephrase "notified and dispatched". I'd probably use "the shared and transmitted query", as I don't like "dispatched". Just my two penn'orth.
@writeaway, I think you are right in the meaning, but Claude-Andrew will have just as many problems trying to use "informed" in that context; he can't put "the informed and dispatched query" either. |