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Etre le leader de notre industrie par la Performance et la Responsabilité

English translation: industry-leading performance and long-term support

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15:23 Sep 15, 2011

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French term or phrase: Etre le leader de notre industrie par la Performance et la Responsabilité

"Etre le leader de notre industrie par la Performance et la Responsabilité sur le long terme" This is the slogan of a company. How do I render it in a catchy phrase. Thanks

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English translation:industry-leading performance and long-term support

Explanation:
I'm guessing at what they might mean by "responsabilité" - a bit more context would be helpful.

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John Detre
Canada

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4 +1

Lead our industry in Performance and Responsibility

Joshua Wolfe

to be the industry leader through long-term performance and responsibility

Mark Radcliffe

Long-time Industry Leaders!

1045

2 +2

industry-leading performance and long-term support

John Detre

We lead the industry in performance and responsibility

Anna Lautzenheiser

Leading our industry through long-term performance and responsibility

savtrad

leaders of our industry in performance and responsibility

reeny

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5 mins confidence:

peer agreement (net): +1

Lead our industry in Performance and Responsibility

Explanation:
I don't find the original particularly catchy -- my suggestion is at least a bit briefer.

Joshua Wolfe
Local time: 03:59
Works in field
Native speaker of:

English

12 mins confidence:

We lead the industry in performance and responsibility

Explanation:
Perhaps this will work?
Or you could also say: Well established leader in performance and responsibility.

Anna Lautzenheiser
United States
Local time: 03:59
Specializes in field
Native speaker of:

English

25 mins confidence:

leaders of our industry in performance and responsibility

Explanation:
or the best in our industry......

reeny
Local time: 09:59
Native speaker of:

English

1 hr confidence:

peer agreement (net): +2

industry-leading performance and long-term support

Explanation:
I'm guessing at what they might mean by "responsabilité" - a bit more context would be helpful.

John Detre
Canada
Native speaker of: English
PRO pts in category: 8

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3 hrs confidence:

to be the industry leader through long-term performance and responsibility

Explanation:
Slightly different slant in that it is the performance and responsibility which will make the company the market leader...also, I think that Responsabilité could be translated as accountability - more context might help.

Mark Radcliffe
United Kingdom
Specializes in field
Native speaker of:

English

4 hrs confidence:

Leading our industry through long-term performance and responsibility

Explanation:
Not the catchiest of catch phrases either, but if this is a slogan, it should make a stand-alone statement about the company.

Agree with Mark's comment about 'responsabilité" possibly referring to accountability.

savtrad
Local time: 09:59
Specializes in field
Native speaker of:

English
PRO pts in category: 4

7 hrs confidence:

Long-time Industry Leaders!

Explanation:
Since this is supposed to be a slogan, it should be SHORT! They are and have been leaders in this industry for a long time because of their sense of 'performance' and 'responsibility'.
Show this suggestion to your clients ...

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Note added at 7 heures (2011-09-15 22:26:13 GMT)
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In this context, the use of capital letters is essential.
SHORT & CATCHY ... like you and your clients want.

1045
Canada
Local time: 03:59
Native speaker of:

French
PRO pts in category: 3

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