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English translation: a very brassy muted trumpet


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08:20 Dec 1, 2009
French to English translations [PRO]
Art/Literary - Music / cuivrée
French term or phrase: cuivrée
text taken from a press article written about a young jazz singer and her band. The sentence reads as follows: " On découvre avec joie une association du piano électrique à une trompette bouchée très cuivrée (...)
Thanks also for any help you can provide on "bouchée" in this particular context.
Ega
Local time: 02:49
English translation:a very brassy muted trumpet
Explanation:
A mute often makes the trumpet sound less brassy, so we are likely defining both the mute used and the style.

Personally I don't like the "very", although it is the straight translation, and might do away with it or use a more expressive and coloured synonym - "truly", etc

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Note added at 3 hrs (2009-12-01 11:37:47 GMT)
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IMO, "sound" is unnecessary extra baggage, not used in the French and not needed in the English
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David Vaughn
Local time: 02:49
Grading comment
Merci!
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Summary of answers provided
4 +3a very brassy muted trumpetDavid Vaughn
3 +2(a muted trumpet) with a very brassy sound
Vicky James
3brassed up
Emmanuelle Debon


  

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4 mins   confidence: Answerer confidence 3/5Answerer confidence 3/5
brassed up


Explanation:
Just a proposal :

"a very brassed up muted trumpet"
(supposing "très cuivrée" means" that the brass side of the trumpet is in contrast with the electric sound of the keyboard)

Emmanuelle Debon
Local time: 02:49
Native speaker of: Native in FrenchFrench
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9 mins   confidence: Answerer confidence 3/5Answerer confidence 3/5 peer agreement (net): +2
(a muted trumpet) with a very brassy sound


Explanation:
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Vicky James
United Kingdom
Local time: 01:49
Specializes in field
Native speaker of: Native in EnglishEnglish
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Asker: Thanks!


Peer comments on this answer (and responses from the answerer)
agree  Martin Cassell
2 hrs
  -> Thanks

agree  Jean-Louis S.
2 hrs
  -> Thanks
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24 mins   confidence: Answerer confidence 4/5Answerer confidence 4/5 peer agreement (net): +3
a very brassy muted trumpet


Explanation:
A mute often makes the trumpet sound less brassy, so we are likely defining both the mute used and the style.

Personally I don't like the "very", although it is the straight translation, and might do away with it or use a more expressive and coloured synonym - "truly", etc

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Note added at 3 hrs (2009-12-01 11:37:47 GMT)
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IMO, "sound" is unnecessary extra baggage, not used in the French and not needed in the English

David Vaughn
Local time: 02:49
Specializes in field
Native speaker of: Native in EnglishEnglish
PRO pts in category: 172
Grading comment
Merci!

Peer comments on this answer (and responses from the answerer)
agree  Wordeffect: How's about "really brassy" - that would make a nice contrast with the electric piano
2 hrs
  -> Yes, better than "very", though if I'd written the original, I would have gone after something more defined and less neutral than "très".

agree  Jean-Louis S.
2 hrs
  -> merci

agree  Verginia Ophof
7 hrs
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