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French: approche amoureuse

English translation: initial flirting stage(s)



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French term or phrase:approche amoureuse
English translation:initial flirting stage(s)
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Art/Literary - Poetry & Literature
French term or phrase: approche amoureuse
Metaphorical use of this one to describe the writing process, not sure if 'foreplay' is appropriate, given that the context is: "la première étape de l’approche amoureuse avant la grande copulation"
Mike Higgins
United Kingdom
Clarification request(s) and response
Andy THEODOROU: 6:32pm Aug 8, 2006: Not clear if it's about the sexual act alone but I would go for 'the flirt' suggestion. Also, is it me or does the French version lack elegance (I can think think of expressions like acte d'amour).
Mike Higgins: 6:47pm Aug 8, 2006: the act - Andy, it's about the writing process, using sexual and relationship metaphors to describe the meeting of several writers and their initial awkward conversations etc before actually sitting down to the act (= writing the piece). The french is not particularly elegant, but I think copulation is used to go with gestation in the previous sentence to give perhaps a clinical feel, whereas what follows is more to do with relationships etc...It's actually quite amusing...

initial flirting stage(s)
Explanation:
simply because we flirt with ideas before starting to write
Otherwise, if you want a harder approach foreplay could work. Really depends on context ...

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or the initial stages of lovemaking

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Note added at 8 hrs (2006-08-08 19:14:00 GMT)
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With the background information, looks like the initial stages of foreplay could well work here
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suezen
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Summary of answers provided
3 +3initial flirting stage(s)
suezen
4 +1courtingMarion Sadoux
3foreplay
MatthewLaSon
3(making a) pass
xxxsergey


  


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5 mins   confidence: Answerer confidence 4/5Answerer confidence 4/5 peer agreement (net): +1
courting

Explanation:
Ce n'est en effet qu'une approche!

Marion Sadoux
United Kingdom
Native speaker of: Native in FrenchFrench
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Asker: MDR, effectivement!

Asker: Peut-être même 'courtship'? Etant donné la présence de 'copulation' dans la même phrase, et 'gestation' dans la phrase précédente?


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agree zaphod
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(making a) pass

Explanation:
pass, noun
• informal
an amorous or sexual advance made to someone :
she made a pass at Stephen.

but that's probably too informal for this style of writing unless you wanted to make it sound disparaging...

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if you want to make it sound really disparaging you might try -

a chat-up line when making a pass before a GRAND shag (taking into account that you've marked it as offensive)

xxxsergey
United Kingdom
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initial flirting stage(s)

Explanation:
simply because we flirt with ideas before starting to write
Otherwise, if you want a harder approach foreplay could work. Really depends on context ...

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Note added at 12 mins (2006-08-08 11:04:12 GMT)
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or the initial stages of lovemaking

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Note added at 8 hrs (2006-08-08 19:14:00 GMT)
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With the background information, looks like the initial stages of foreplay could well work here

suezen
France
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Native speaker of: Native in EnglishEnglish
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Peer comments on this answer (and responses from the answerer)
agree monxmood: c bien ca ! delicat :^)
13 mins
  -> thanks monxmood :-)

agree Angelo Berbotto: i like this one
1 hr
  -> thanks Angelo

agree Andy THEODOROU
7 hrs
  -> thanks Andy
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16 hrs   confidence: Answerer confidence 3/5Answerer confidence 3/5
foreplay

Explanation:
Hello,

This is foreplay. It is used to described the initial phase of the writing process.

It's the slow, flirting (teasing) phase of writing leading to the climax.


    Reference: http://www.jennycrusie.com/essays/writingromancefromtv.php
MatthewLaSon
United States
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