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14:57 Sep 6, 2006
French to English translations [PRO]
Art/Literary - Poetry & Literature
French term or phrase: coup de gaz/collé-serré
I'm translating a song about a couple breaking up and am struggling to come up with an equivalent in English of these two phrases which appear in the following text:

Ca y est! Une interruption s'impose
Coup de gaz dans ce couplet a l'eau de rose
Pour lui un coup d'un soir, pour elle un coup du sort
Comment s'en sortir quand les liens se détériorent
On s'est rapproché sur un collé-serré

Any ideas would be very much appreciated!

thanks
day for night
United Kingdom
Local time: 03:39
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Summary of answers provided
4 +1different interpretationxxxBourth
4Stop/ Slow song
Alain BERTRAND
1 +1two answers
Jeffrey Lewis


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16 mins   confidence: Answerer confidence 1/5Answerer confidence 1/5 peer agreement (net): +1
two answers


Explanation:
First one - I leav it to you to rhyme it, but the coup de gaz can be a little wrinkle in your nose, a little wrinkle in this poem on paper perfumed with the scent of rose

(paper also wrinkles; this is kind of hard to do because you don't want to say 'stink' for the anti-rosy smell)

collé-serré LOOKS to me like a very contemporary expression for people being physically close together (I Googled it), and I'm wondering if the next lines in the song have something to do with "we met at a party" or something like that. It looks like the realtionship was conceived by the two partners in different sense from the beginning so maybe you could give a few more lines -

Otherwise words in English that might work for that -

destiny threw us together

we met in a crowd

first it was a crush - then we wanted it to stay that way

he held her in his arms - she held him in her heart

I like songs like this


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Note added at 21 mins (2006-09-06 15:18:30 GMT)
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'crush' in English means to be pressed together (also as in crushed to pieces!) but also refers to a coup de coeur, a sudden attraction to someone ('I had a crush on her' = I was attracted to her)

Jeffrey Lewis
United States
Local time: 21:39
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Native speaker of: Native in EnglishEnglish
PRO pts in category: 24

Peer comments on this answer (and responses from the answerer)
agree  juliebarba: I'll go for your collé-serré, but Bourth's version of coup de gaz (sparkle). Like two swans could be an OK version. But see Bourth's post for what I initially understood
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2 hrs   confidence: Answerer confidence 4/5Answerer confidence 4/5 peer agreement (net): +1
different interpretation


Explanation:
Interesting how the same words mean different things to different people!

For me, "coup de gaz" means "acceleration", as in to give a "coup de gaz" on a motorbike or a car, or a plane for that matter, is to "twist the throttle", i.e. go faster.

In connection with "eau de rose", I also see a connection with "fizzy drink", "eau gazéifiée".

Either way, it might be translated as "put a little sparkle in this rose-syrup ... verse/relationship" ("couplet" is close enough to "couple" for the second syllable to have been added just for metre).

My first thought for "collé-serré" was a "glued-clamped" connection, in woodwork for instance. And why not apply it to a relationship? But it appears that "collé-serré" is part and parcel of "dirty dancing" like zouk and lambada, and prob. tango too, where thighs are pushed against groins, etc. Disgusting!

"We got (it) together on a hot dancefloor"?

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Note added at 2 hrs (2006-09-06 17:42:31 GMT)
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Getting back to "collé-serré": like two pieces of wood in a vice/vise???

xxxBourth
Local time: 04:39
Native speaker of: Native in EnglishEnglish
PRO pts in category: 110

Peer comments on this answer (and responses from the answerer)
agree  juliebarba: I'd go for your version of coup de gaz (sparkle) , but for Jeff's version of collé-serré. A vice?? how about like 2 swans rather? having said that my first thought was they meant stranglin' the other\\eyesight I'd read colle-serré without accent :)
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  -> Spending too much time at work and not enough on your relationship?
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21 hrs   confidence: Answerer confidence 4/5Answerer confidence 4/5
Stop/ Slow song


Explanation:
"Coup de gaz" may mean "a brutal stop" in that love story like a "coup de gaz" that sometimes happened in french underground coal mines.
"collé serré" comes from the french slang --> in relation with the way a couple dances on a slow song.
If this is a song any word can have multiple meanings.

Alain BERTRAND
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Local time: 06:39
Native speaker of: Native in FrenchFrench, Native in EnglishEnglish
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