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les dérives de la stratégie

English translation: the excess of strategy


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French term or phrase:les dérives de la stratégie
English translation:the excess of strategy
Entered by: nyyakash
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17:18 Mar 6, 2005
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Social Sciences - Social Science, Sociology, Ethics, etc. / human rights and power
French term or phrase: les dérives de la stratégie
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nyyakash
Local time: 21:03
the excess of strategy
Explanation:
to inform people and make them aware of the excess of strategy and power relations which are more and more disproportionate and destructive

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Note added at 29 mins (2005-03-06 17:48:48 GMT)
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maybe better
structures of power
instead of
power relations
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Estelle Demontrond-Box
United Kingdom
Local time: 20:03
Grading comment
Thanks a lot!!! That's word I was looking for! It did not come to my mind
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Summary of answers provided
3the vagaries of strategy
Richard Benham
3changes/drifts/shifts in strategy and power relations
Aisha Maniar
2 +1the excess of strategy
Estelle Demontrond-Box
3consequencestatyana000


Discussion entries: 8





  

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26 mins   confidence: Answerer confidence 3/5Answerer confidence 3/5
les dérives de la stratégie
consequences


Explanation:
To raise awareness and inform peopel about the consequences of the strategy and power relatisn, which are becoming more and more uneven/disproportionate/unequal and destructive

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Note added at 26 mins (2005-03-06 17:45:46 GMT)
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sorry that\'s people and power relations

tatyana000
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26 mins   confidence: Answerer confidence 2/5Answerer confidence 2/5 peer agreement (net): +1
les dérives de la stratégie
the excess of strategy


Explanation:
to inform people and make them aware of the excess of strategy and power relations which are more and more disproportionate and destructive

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Note added at 29 mins (2005-03-06 17:48:48 GMT)
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maybe better
structures of power
instead of
power relations

Estelle Demontrond-Box
United Kingdom
Local time: 20:03
Works in field
Native speaker of: Native in FrenchFrench
PRO pts in category: 8
Grading comment
Thanks a lot!!! That's word I was looking for! It did not come to my mind

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agree  xxxPhilippe C.
3 hrs
  -> merci philippe
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30 mins   confidence: Answerer confidence 3/5Answerer confidence 3/5
les dérives de la stratégie
changes/drifts/shifts in strategy and power relations


Explanation:
To raise awareness and inform the public about changes in strategy and power relations which are becoming...

Just another suggestion

Aisha Maniar
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29 mins   confidence: Answerer confidence 3/5Answerer confidence 3/5
les dérives de la stratégie
the vagaries of strategy


Explanation:
Just a suggestion really. The French seems a little pretentious and not entirely meaningful.

How about "To raise awareness of and provide information about the vagaries of strategy and of power relations, which are becoming increasingly overblown and destructive"? I know it's a bit literal and doesn't make a whole heap of sense, but then does the original?

"Divagations" might be a pleasant alternative to "vagaries".

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Note added at 32 mins (2005-03-06 17:51:48 GMT) Post-grading
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It occurs to me that \"disproportionnées et destructrices\" could agree with either \"dérives\" or \"relations\". In the latter case, \"overblown\" is not a good idea. Maybe \"out of proportion\"...?

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Note added at 37 mins (2005-03-06 17:56:21 GMT) Post-grading
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So you ought to be.

Richard Benham
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sorry
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