14:47 Oct 31
I just spoke with my good friend in France who claims that the sentence is too long [I agree] and that is poorly written..I'm njo that sure.
Would you all mind seeing what you think about my 'stab' at this long sentence:
"The arrival of new industrial actors coming from the motor industry, or the aeronautics sector or from the ITC sector and from which the strategy from this point on is to strongly develop the railway market, is added on the industrial level, concentration, and often on the European level or sometimes the worldwide level."
Thanks again (time for my café, etc. enfin!@) |