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on reçoit des feuilles

Italian translation: ci arrivano foglie


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15:17 Dec 21, 2011
French to Italian translations [PRO]
Art/Literary - Poetry & Literature
French term or phrase: on reçoit des feuilles
Le brouillard descend par couche, toujours plus épais. Par-dessus les clotures, on reçoit des feuilles, des gouttes d'eau et les bruits des arbres, aussi de tout petits accords de piano; tout à coup, on est si malheureux que la gorge fait mal.
clizia75
Local time: 13:46
Italian translation:ci arrivano foglie
Explanation:
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Note added at 31 minutes (2011-12-21 15:48:17 GMT)
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ci arrivano foglie, gocce d'acqua e il rumore degli alberi e a volte anche il suono lieve di un piano forte .....

on reçoit des feuilles et tout ce qui suit .....

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Note added at 1 heure (2011-12-21 16:23:28 GMT)
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Dall'alto delle recinzioni ci arrivano foglie........
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Carole Poirey
Italy
Local time: 13:46
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Summary of answers provided
4 +2ci arrivano foglie
Carole Poirey
4scivolano foglieBdiL
4arrivano a noi (le) foglie
Pierluigi Bernardini
4si insinuano delle foglie
Glinda
3Arrivano
Francesco Damiani
3provengono foglie...
Laura Cecci Dupuy
2ci giungono delle foglie
Giuseppe Bellone


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11 mins   confidence: Answerer confidence 2/5Answerer confidence 2/5
on reçoit des feullies
ci giungono delle foglie


Explanation:
Potrebbe essere?

Giuseppe Bellone
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12 mins   confidence: Answerer confidence 4/5Answerer confidence 4/5
on reçoit des feullies
si insinuano delle foglie


Explanation:
Una proposta

Glinda
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34 mins   confidence: Answerer confidence 4/5Answerer confidence 4/5
on reçoit des feullies
scivolano foglie


Explanation:
anche "s'insinuano" (con l'apostrofo) non mi dispiace, ma...
EVITARE il partitivo (delle), è orrendo!
...foglie, gocce d'acqua, la voce degli alberi [se non si vuole usare "rumore" o cadere nello "stormire"].

Maurizio

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35 mins   confidence: Answerer confidence 4/5Answerer confidence 4/5
on reçoit des feullies
arrivano a noi (le) foglie


Explanation:
gocce d'acqua e il fruscio degli alberi...

Un'idea per mantenere lo stile poetico.
Eviterei il partitivo, con o senza articolo determinativo.

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Note added at 39 min (2011-12-21 15:56:52 GMT)
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Le foglie e le gocce d'acqua, trasportate dal vento, cadono probabilmente fisicamente addosso al personaggio, mentre le sensazioni uditive, cioè il fruscio degli alberi e le note di pianoforte, gli giungono all'orecchio. La difficoltà era nel rendere la frase con un verbo che comprendesse tutte le sensazioni.

Pierluigi Bernardini
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26 mins   confidence: Answerer confidence 4/5Answerer confidence 4/5 peer agreement (net): +2
on reçoit des feullies
ci arrivano foglie


Explanation:
.........

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Note added at 31 minutes (2011-12-21 15:48:17 GMT)
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ci arrivano foglie, gocce d'acqua e il rumore degli alberi e a volte anche il suono lieve di un piano forte .....

on reçoit des feuilles et tout ce qui suit .....

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Note added at 1 heure (2011-12-21 16:23:28 GMT)
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Dall'alto delle recinzioni ci arrivano foglie........

Carole Poirey
Italy
Local time: 13:46
Native speaker of: Native in FrenchFrench
PRO pts in category: 369

Peer comments on this answer (and responses from the answerer)
agree  Annie DAUVERGNE
1 hr
  -> Merci

agree  Francesco Damiani
20 hrs
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1 hr   confidence: Answerer confidence 3/5Answerer confidence 3/5
on reçoit des feullies
provengono foglie...


Explanation:
Un'altra possibilità

Laura Cecci Dupuy
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20 hrs   confidence: Answerer confidence 3/5Answerer confidence 3/5
Arrivano


Explanation:
Io eliminerei il "Ci" e come hanno già evidenziato dei colleghi non userei il partitivo.

Francesco Damiani
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Changes made by editors
Dec 21, 2011 - Changes made by Emanuela Galdelli:
Term askedon reçoit des feullies => on reçoit des feuilles


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