13:23 May 20, 2002 |
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| Selected response from: Mary Worby United Kingdom Local time: 15:04 | ||||||
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The company's quality standards are increasingly met by the accompanying logistics service Explanation: or logistics providor |
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In terms of the company's own products, the concept of quality is increasingly being extended to ... Explanation: ... include the accompanying logistics service. That's how I understand it, i.e. that the definition of the quality of a product involves the logistics as well, so whether it's delivered on time, correctly, with proper packaging. You could possibly rephrase to say .. Accompanying logistics services are increasingly being incorporated in the definition of quality for the company's own products. But it's not crystal clear, I just can't think of another way of interpreting it )-: HTH Mary -------------------------------------------------- Note added at 2002-05-20 13:44:51 (GMT) -------------------------------------------------- A more direct translation might be: The emphasis of the definition of quality for the company\'s own products is increasingly shifting towards the accompanying logistics service ... Which then ties in OK with the bit in brackets afterwards (-: |
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sentence Explanation: The conceptualization of quality in proprietary products is increasingly shifting to the attendant efficiency of their logistics (up to now, the management of shipping and forwarding did not find itself in the auditors' focus) |
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- translation below - Explanation: The company's product quality assurance program has been expanding into the firm's logistic operations. -------------------------------------------------- Note added at 2002-05-20 14:08:21 (GMT) -------------------------------------------------- Clean, clear, simple, direct, and active. Just what is needed for a PP presentational format. -------------------------------------------------- Note added at 2002-05-20 14:22:33 (GMT) Post-grading -------------------------------------------------- Clean, clear, simple, direct, and active. Clean, clear, simple, direct, and active. Clean, clear, simple, direct, and active. Clean, clear, simple, direct, and active. Clean, clear, simple, direct, and active. Clean, clear, simple, direct, and active. Clean, clear, simple, direct, and active. Just what is needed for a PP presentational format. |
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