several (sorry)

English translation: see explanation

14:58 Jun 21, 2001
German to English translations [PRO]
Bus/Financial
German term or phrase: several (sorry)
I essentially know what this means, but I'd appreciate suggestions for the proper wording in (UK) English:

Hiermit ermächte(n) ich/wir Sie widerruflich, die von mir zu entrichtende Zahlung bei Fälligkeit zu Lasten meines/unseres Kontos mittels Lastschrift einzuziehen. Damit ist auch meine/unsere kontoführende Bank ermächtigt, die Lastschriften einzulösen, wobei für diese keine Verpflichtung zur Einlösung besteht, insbesondere dann, wenn mein/unser Konto die erforderliche Deckung nicht aufweist. Ich/Wir habe(n) das Recht, innerhalb von 42 Kalendertagen ab dem Abbuchungstag ohne Angabe von Gründen die Rückbuchung bei meiner/unserer Bank zu veranlassen.
Ken Cox
Local time: 13:19
English translation:see explanation
Explanation:
I (we)hereby authorize
you revocably to debit the amount payable by me on the due date to my/our account.My(our) bank is authorized but not obliged to charge the debit items to my(our) account, especially not if my/our account has insufficient funds.I(we) have the right to ask my (our) bank for a reversal within 42 days after the debit entry, without having to produce reasons.
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Johanna Timm, PhD
Canada
Local time: 04:19
Grading comment
Thanks for the quick response. I had arrived at something close to this, but 'two heads etc.', and I doubt that there's that much difference between UK and NA.
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naI'd give it a whack, but
Kim Metzger
nasee explanation
Johanna Timm, PhD
nasorry
Johanna Timm, PhD


  

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5 hrs
I'd give it a whack, but


Explanation:
I wouldn't mind trying my hand at this, but I'm a Yank and wouldn't want to go to all the trouble just to be told it isn't UK enough.

Kim Metzger
Mexico
Local time: 05:19
Native speaker of: Native in EnglishEnglish
PRO pts in pair: 22192
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5 hrs
see explanation


Explanation:
I (we)hereby authorize
you revocably to debit the amount payable by me on the due date to my/our account.My(our) bank is authorized but not obliged to charge the debit items to my(our) account, especially not if my/our account has insufficient funds.I(we) have the right to ask my (our) bank for a reversal within 42 days after the debit entry, without having to produce reasons.


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Johanna Timm, PhD
Canada
Local time: 04:19
Native speaker of: Native in GermanGerman
PRO pts in pair: 7769
Grading comment
Thanks for the quick response. I had arrived at something close to this, but 'two heads etc.', and I doubt that there's that much difference between UK and NA.

Peer comments on this answer (and responses from the answerer)
Mary Worby: Sounds UK enough to me!
3 hrs
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5 hrs
sorry


Explanation:
sorry, I realized just now that you requested UK-English- my version is Canadian! Hope this will still put you on the right track.


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Johanna Timm, PhD
Canada
Local time: 04:19
Native speaker of: Native in GermanGerman
PRO pts in pair: 7769

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Uschi (Ursula) Walke
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