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zu einer sachlichen Auseinandersetzung beitragen sollte

English translation: were intended to (or: supposed to) contribute to an objective discussion


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German term or phrase: zu einer sachlichen Auseinandersetzung beitragen sollte
English translation:were intended to (or: supposed to) contribute to an objective discussion
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17:13 Apr 14, 2005
German to English translations [PRO]
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German term or phrase: zu einer sachlichen Auseinandersetzung beitragen sollte
Inwieweit die folgenden Passagen von Herrn Dr. med. Budde zu einer sachlichen Auseinandersetzung beitragen sollten, die zudem in der Öffentlichkeit von ihm geführt wurde, bleibt mir verschlossen. Als Mutter empfand ich das folgende Zitat aus dem Anschreiben von Herrn Budde einfach nur schmerzlich (Zitat Herr Dr. med. Budde): „Wir bedauern häufig die Kinder und uns fragen, ob es nicht unsere Pflicht ist, das Jugendamt einzuschalten“ (Zitat Ende).
Lorna O'Donoghue
Local time: 03:03
were intended to (or: supposed to) contribute to an objective discussion
Explanation:
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silfilla
Local time: 22:03
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Summary of answers provided
3 +3...dispassionate debate...Andrew Swift
4 +1were supposed to contribute to an objective discussion
ntext
4meant to be part of a fair and open discussion
Victor Dewsbery
3 +1...were meant to be supportive of a rational/objective discourse/dispute...VerenaH
4were intended to (or: supposed to) contribute to an objective discussionsilfilla
4contribute to a factual discussion
Alexander Schleber
2 +1can be regarded as objectiveIan M-H


  

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6 mins   confidence: Answerer confidence 4/5Answerer confidence 4/5
were intended to (or: supposed to) contribute to an objective discussion


Explanation:
hth

silfilla
Local time: 22:03
Specializes in field
PRO pts in category: 121
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Many thanks to all
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6 mins   confidence: Answerer confidence 4/5Answerer confidence 4/5 peer agreement (net): +1
zu einer sachlichen Auseinandersetzung beitragen sollten
were supposed to contribute to an objective discussion


Explanation:
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ntext
United States
Local time: 21:03
Specializes in field
Native speaker of: Native in EnglishEnglish, Native in GermanGerman
PRO pts in category: 118

Peer comments on this answer (and responses from the answerer)
agree  EllenEZBless
5 hrs
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7 mins   confidence: Answerer confidence 4/5Answerer confidence 4/5
contribute to a factual discussion


Explanation:
Short and to the point, though I think you will get many other suggestions.

Alexander Schleber
Local time: 04:03
Specializes in field
Native speaker of: Native in GermanGerman, Native in EnglishEnglish
PRO pts in category: 227
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7 mins   confidence: Answerer confidence 3/5Answerer confidence 3/5 peer agreement (net): +1
...were meant to be supportive of a rational/objective discourse/dispute...


Explanation:
...were meant to be supportive of a rational/objective discourse/dispute...


VerenaH
Local time: 04:03
Native speaker of: Native in GermanGerman
PRO pts in category: 4

Peer comments on this answer (and responses from the answerer)
agree  Glyn Haggett: I think "sachlich" has the sense of something like "sensible" in this context, the implication being that the comments are not altogether helpful. HTH
18 mins
neutral  Ian M-H: "supportive" doesn't feel quite right. "conducive to", perhaps?
1 hr
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1 hr   confidence: Answerer confidence 3/5Answerer confidence 3/5 peer agreement (net): +3
...dispassionate debate...


Explanation:
another adjective, another noun
...and 600ggls for "dispassionate debate"
beitragen = contribute (of course)

Andrew Swift
United Kingdom
Local time: 03:03
Native speaker of: Native in EnglishEnglish
PRO pts in category: 242

Peer comments on this answer (and responses from the answerer)
agree  Ian M-H: perhaps discussion rather than debate here, but dispassionate is definitely worth an "agree"
4 mins
agree  Susanne Rindlisbacher
6 mins
agree  LittleBalu
15 mins
neutral  Victor Dewsbery: Very formal register for a mother talking about a doctor who wants to get her kids taken away from her.
32 mins
  -> This poor victim of the medical establishment sounds quite articulate to me. Should we seek to disenfranchise her by lowering her register? Some might consider that to be patronising.
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1 hr   confidence: Answerer confidence 2/5Answerer confidence 2/5 peer agreement (net): +1
zu einer sachlichen Auseinandersetzung beitragen sollte
can be regarded as objective


Explanation:
Victor's right about "sachlich" but I think it can be "objective" here if you rephrase, for example:

It is hard to see [or, stronger and closer to the original: It remains a mystery to me] how the following remarks by Dr. B, especially given that they were made [he made them] public, can be seen/regarded as objective.

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Note added at 1 hr 24 mins (2005-04-14 18:37:27 GMT)
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I like Andrew\'s dispassionate. Maybe \"conducive to a dispassionate discussion of the issues\"?

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Note added at 1 hr 26 mins (2005-04-14 18:39:09 GMT)
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or \"exchange of views\"


Ian M-H
United States
Local time: 22:03
Native speaker of: Native in EnglishEnglish
PRO pts in category: 40

Peer comments on this answer (and responses from the answerer)
agree  Andrew Swift: ...for 'conducive'. Excellent word! (Providing Victor OKs the register)
45 mins
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29 mins   confidence: Answerer confidence 4/5Answerer confidence 4/5
meant to be part of a fair and open discussion


Explanation:
The text appears to be a personal reaction (and probably a bit emotional, too), not part of a philosophical and rational discourse.
Therefore I prefer to tone down the register a bit.
And "sachlich" is a terrible word to translate. "factual" and "objective" are not wrong, of course, but here they seem rather too formal (and the same goes for "contribute", too).
The word "sachlich" is a chameleon (and often a smoke screen to boot), so I always look for ways to translate the meaning instead of the word.

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Note added at 1 hr 54 mins (2005-04-14 19:07:55 GMT)
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Has everybody noticed the last bit of the context which Lorna gave us?
The woman who wrote this text is hurt about the fact that somebody wants to take her kids away.
I don\'t think she\'d use words like \"factual\", \"objective\", \"rational\" or \"dispassionate\".
I tend to sympathise with Eliza Doolittle rather than Professor \'Iggins.

Victor Dewsbery
Germany
Local time: 04:03
Works in field
Native speaker of: Native in EnglishEnglish
PRO pts in category: 55

Peer comments on this answer (and responses from the answerer)
neutral  LittleBalu: Wouldn't you change the "message" of the original statement - whether emotional or not - by "toning down"? I do agree, however, that "sachlich" is a tough one.
1 hr
  -> I still feel that "fair and open" is the best equivalent for "sachlich" in this context. What would you like me to tone down in the message?
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