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mit Raffinesse und dem richtigen Gespür in Szene setzen

English translation: Here you will (can) experience refinement and (that special) flair perfectly displayed.


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German term or phrase:mit Raffinesse und dem richtigen Gespür in Szene setzen
English translation:Here you will (can) experience refinement and (that special) flair perfectly displayed.
Entered by: martina1974
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09:51 May 31, 2011
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German term or phrase: mit Raffinesse und dem richtigen Gespür in Szene setzen
Ein großes xx Sortiment finden Sie als Shop-in-Shop-Konzept im „Genussregal“ in Vogau.
Das Genussregal ist imposante 60 Meter lang und beeindruckende 12 Meter hoch. Ein überlebensgroßes Regal, ein wahres Denkmal regionaler Genusswelten, eingebettet in die hiesige Landschaft, unmittelbar mit der Vinofaktur Vogau verbunden. Wo Genuss mit Raffinesse und dem richtigen Gespür in Szene gesetzt und erlebt werden kann.

Where enjoyment is sophisticatedly and tactfully put into focus and can be experienced.??
Vielen Dank!
martina1974
Austria
Local time: 00:55
Here you will (can) experience refinement and (that special) flair perfectly displayed.
Explanation:
I would turn it around a bit.

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Note added at 22 hrs (2011-06-01 08:23:07 GMT)
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Another option:

Where you can indulge in refined pleasure and (that special) flair, elegantly on display.
Selected response from:

Ramey Rieger
Local time: 00:55
Grading comment
vielen Dank!
4 KudoZ points were awarded for this answer



Summary of answers provided
4Where pleasure can be both ...
maelbro
4a stylish and alluring display of the winemaker's artphilgoddard
3 +1Here you will (can) experience refinement and (that special) flair perfectly displayed.
Ramey Rieger
3 +1where pleasure can be communicated with all the latest trimmings and a keen sense
Stephen Sadie
4where pleasure can be put into the limelight with sophistication and the right instinctsxxxtrans4biz
3is staged with sophistication and the right touch, and experienced that wayHorst Huber
3display with refinement and just the right toneJohn Hein-Hartmann
2Where pleasure...
Camilla Seifert


  

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12 mins   confidence: Answerer confidence 3/5Answerer confidence 3/5 peer agreement (net): +1
where pleasure can be communicated with all the latest trimmings and a keen sense


Explanation:
for starters

Stephen Sadie
Germany
Local time: 00:55
Native speaker of: Native in EnglishEnglish
PRO pts in category: 52

Peer comments on this answer (and responses from the answerer)
agree  Ingeborg Gowans: I like it!! - yes, I just came back from Germany, after 6 years, with our son to show him around
1 hr
  -> thanks, long time no see - hope you are keeping well
neutral  Cilian O'Tuama: communicated with a keen sense?
1 hr
agree  Camilla Seifert: I made my own suggestion below as an alternative - but certainly like yours too.
2 hrs
disagree  Edwin Miles: Sorry, Stephen, it's wordy and misses the sense of refinement/sophistication/indulgence
5 hrs
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15 mins   confidence: Answerer confidence 4/5Answerer confidence 4/5
where pleasure can be put into the limelight with sophistication and the right instincts


Explanation:
alternative: can be highlighted or accentuated......

xxxtrans4biz
Local time: 00:55
Native speaker of: Native in GermanGerman

Peer comments on this answer (and responses from the answerer)
neutral  Cilian O'Tuama: can be put into the limelight with the right instincts?
1 hr
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35 mins   confidence: Answerer confidence 3/5Answerer confidence 3/5
display with refinement and just the right tone


Explanation:
Another alternative which I believe captures the tone of the original more accurately.

Example sentence(s):
  • Where pleasure can be displayed and experienced with refinement and just the right tone.
John Hein-Hartmann
United Kingdom
Local time: 23:55
Works in field
Native speaker of: Native in EnglishEnglish
PRO pts in category: 4
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2 hrs   confidence: Answerer confidence 2/5Answerer confidence 2/5
Where pleasure...


Explanation:
Where pleasure and sophistication are appreciated in the right setting.

As another idea.

Camilla Seifert
South Africa
Local time: 00:55
Specializes in field
Native speaker of: Native in EnglishEnglish, Native in GermanGerman
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3 hrs   confidence: Answerer confidence 4/5Answerer confidence 4/5
Where pleasure can be both ...


Explanation:
Where pleasure can be both displayed and experienced with sophistication - and a true sense of the occasion!

I would try to glam this up (mostly with punctuation) for a marketing/sales blurb.


maelbro
United Kingdom
Local time: 23:55
Works in field
Native speaker of: Native in EnglishEnglish
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4 hrs   confidence: Answerer confidence 4/5Answerer confidence 4/5
a stylish and alluring display of the winemaker's art


Explanation:
I've been looking at the company's website, and I'm not clear whether it's just wine or it includes food as well, but I think you have to get a long way away from what the German says - otherwise it just looks like a translation.

philgoddard
Local time: 17:55
Native speaker of: English
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19 hrs   confidence: Answerer confidence 3/5Answerer confidence 3/5
is staged with sophistication and the right touch, and experienced that way


Explanation:
The formulation is somewhat top-heavy. One would have to rewrite a bit?

Horst Huber
Local time: 18:55
Specializes in field
Native speaker of: Native in GermanGerman
PRO pts in category: 4
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2 hrs   confidence: Answerer confidence 3/5Answerer confidence 3/5 peer agreement (net): +1
Here you will (can) experience refinement and (that special) flair perfectly displayed.


Explanation:
I would turn it around a bit.

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Note added at 22 hrs (2011-06-01 08:23:07 GMT)
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Another option:

Where you can indulge in refined pleasure and (that special) flair, elegantly on display.

Ramey Rieger
Local time: 00:55
Works in field
Native speaker of: Native in EnglishEnglish
PRO pts in category: 40
Grading comment
vielen Dank!

Peer comments on this answer (and responses from the answerer)
agree  Edwin Miles: The best so far.
6 hrs
  -> Thanks Edwin, hope life is treating you well!
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Changes made by editors
May 31, 2011 - Changes made by writeaway:
Field (specific)Idioms / Maxims / Sayings => General / Conversation / Greetings / Letters
Field (write-in)(none) => marketing blurb
May 31, 2011 - Changes made by Steffen Walter:
FieldOther => Marketing


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